Hey, sorry this is so late, but nice post @ty7lucky! Just one thing, I had mentioned that the Quidditch match is on Friday, and it's Sunday then. You mentioned it was tomorrow. I thought putting it on Friday would give time for us to have some practices, maybe build up some tension, and have the other characters interact with the players, as well as watch the practices.
But if you'd prefer the next day, I wouldn't mind. Just thought I'd tell you this.
Also, who's posting next?
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