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WARRIORS, The Second Moon [DT]



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Mon Aug 29, 2016 7:15 pm
sheysse says...



Loved the post, @Gymnast2801! I laughed out a loud at the fox conversation part! One thing though... You called Goldenstar Goldenheart... Could you please change it?
  





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Mon Aug 29, 2016 7:23 pm
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Oh, sorry about that! I couldn't remember the names other than Mousepaw but I will change that now.
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 8:07 pm
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Awesome posts, @Gymnast2801! :D

I admit I'm really nervous about doing my post. ^^" I'm not sure how good of a job I can do. I read the newest book quite recently (a month ago at the most) but I still feel unsure of how I can write it.

I guess I'll just have to start writing to find out! :D
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 8:24 pm
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I have a really important question for my post. What should happen in it? I'm not sure what everyone wants me to include.
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 8:50 pm
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I bet you'll do great Mage! And I'm sure no one would judge you either way.
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 11:00 pm
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I certainly won't judge... So just post! No one is gonna be like "Oh mah gersh Mage! Your post sux and u should just quit now!" Or at least I hope they don't. Because then I'd remove them.
Just kidding! I know you guys wouldn't ever do that! :D
  





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Mon Aug 29, 2016 11:17 pm
Lael says...



Just put whatever you feel would be good, like they could go start off to the Moonpool or something? ;)
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Tue Aug 30, 2016 12:38 am
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Gymnast2801 says...



Yeah, or your character could be in battle training or maybe having a conversation about their special powers? Just ideas :)

Pulse, we are all hear to learn new ways to write and get better :D
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Tue Aug 30, 2016 7:28 pm
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sheysse says...



Just a quick reminder that you can post your first post (@Mage and @Chaser) whenever you want, but if you want points for the challenge, then you have to post by tomorrow!
  





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Tue Aug 30, 2016 7:33 pm
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How do you know what your word count is?
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Tue Aug 30, 2016 8:48 pm
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I would copy and paste it into something you can see the word count with (like a Word document or document in OpenOffice). Worst case scenario, I could do that for you! :D
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Wed Aug 31, 2016 10:08 pm
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I'm going to start writing my post right now, for real. I've gotten an idea of what I want to do. The minute I finish it, I'll post it in the actual storybook! :D
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Thu Sep 01, 2016 12:37 am
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Mageheart says...



I solved my problem by giving Cedarpaw my anxiety. Because I'm kind like that. :P I think his most defining traits are his optimism, kindness, anxiety, and how much he admires Swiftleap.

I love your post, by the way, @Chaser! :D
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Thu Sep 01, 2016 10:29 am
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sheysse says...



I haven't gotten a chance to read @Mage and @Chaser's posts, because of things. But later I will for sure. Thanks everyone, for posting and completing the challenge!
  





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Thu Sep 01, 2016 10:38 am
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You're welcome! :D
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