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Sun Oct 16, 2016 10:31 pm
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Europa says...



@Lael I think that an actual terrorist group would be an interesting twist, and it would add another reason why the police were searching the train. We just need to find a way to make them more involved with the story.

It could be just a car full of bombs and advanced weaponry that had been outlawed recently. So our heroes could be pegged as being involved with some sort of black market.





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Tue Oct 25, 2016 2:49 am
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Europa says...



Dang. Sorry that took so long and sorry for any mistakes. I'll be going back and editing it soon, but If you want to get the gist of what happens, you can go ahead and read now.





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Wed Oct 26, 2016 2:03 am
JustJasper says...



Alright everyone now that Fanty has posted I would like to keep the ball rolling and post next. I will try to have my post up tomorrow and I would love it if I could get a volunteer then to post next. It would be great if whoever posts after me could get their post up this week.

Thanks guys!

-Ossie
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It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

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Thu Oct 27, 2016 12:05 am
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Poopsie says...



Would you like the next good person to include a reason to get our characters up and moving
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Thu Oct 27, 2016 12:40 am
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Europa says...



I think we were planning to do the whole framed for terrorism thing.





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Thu Oct 27, 2016 12:46 am
JustJasper says...



Yeah as long as that idea is okay with everyone.

EDIT: In my post I am going to reference the fact that a terrorist group exists but together we need to pick a name for the group and for the city they have arrived in. Please post your suggestions and then we can vote.

-Ossie
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

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Thu Oct 27, 2016 1:41 am
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Poopsie says...



Make a poll
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Thu Oct 27, 2016 2:57 am
JustJasper says...



I don't know how to make a poll. If you could message me instructions or something like that I would greatly appreciate it.

-Ossie
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
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It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

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Sat Oct 29, 2016 1:58 pm
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AvantCoffee says...



Is it too late to join? I want to make a super cool android character. I've read all the posts and character profiles etc.





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Sat Oct 29, 2016 3:09 pm
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JustJasper says...



Go ahead we would love to have you @CoffeeCat! I can't wait to see what you come up with.
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It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

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Sat Oct 29, 2016 11:07 pm
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Poopsie says...



Who's Grunge and Actress and General?
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Sun Oct 30, 2016 12:11 am
JustJasper says...



Grunge is Tereza.
General is Ash.
Actress is Ivonne.
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
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It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

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Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:34 am
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AvantCoffee says...



Yay! I'll start writing a chapter :)

Um... I also made a list of all the characters and 'anime-style' images of their descriptions (to help me wrap my head around it all). I though it might help you guys as well, so here it is:

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Mason or 'Lion' (@Oswin1800)
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Tereza or 'Grunge' (@nickelgotyourback)
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Ash or 'General' (@Poopsie)
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Chaser or 'Shark' (@Chaser)
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Sivv or 'Mouse' (@StupidSoup)
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Clover or 'Azure' (@Oswin1800)
Image(I gave her horns because you said she "usually has a tail or appendage of another animal from her powers")

Ivvone or 'Actress' (@Lael)
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Alder or 'A' (@TheFantasy14)
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Electra (@CoffeeCat)
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I feel like I got Sivv totally wrong haha. I tried my best to make them all as you described, however if I got nicknames mixed up or the pictures are wrong in some way just PM me and I can edit it.
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Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:47 am
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Lael says...



Ayyy I like that site @CoffeeCat! Though I'm not sure Ivonne looks entirely right. I think the nose would more be like the 1st one in the selection and the eyes shouldn't be that slanted. Her eyes are big, though they do need to carry that irritated look. ;) But good job! :)
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Sun Oct 30, 2016 4:13 am
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AvantCoffee says...



@Lael @Oswin1800 Okay I updated you characters. Check 'em out! If they're still not to your pleasing just let me know.








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