Young Writers Society

@Desdemona when you posted and involved Benjamin crawford, that messes with my story. Benjamin crawford wasn't actually killed by bandits. Eleanora murders him and blames it on the random bandit attack

And it messes with the timeline a bit, Benjamin dies two days before Willa rides into town

Um, if you read carefully, you'll see that bandits weren't involved in his death @Gravity.

I imagined Benjamin Crawford being dragged onto the street by his wife for the body to appear less suspicious. That is also why his wife is so jumpy and afraid -- because it was her who killed him.

Also, for the timeline; you should have posted earlier. Willa already had many dialogues and your post doesn't fit the time period. Besides, it wasn't even obvious.

@Desdemona Gravity did post before you and already stated at the beginning of her post that Benjamin was already dead and buried in the middle of the day. So your post is a little off of the timeline.

Her post started with that, yes. I mentioned how that came to be in my post is all. There was no indication in the post that it had happened before Willias arrival, so I assumed it happened after TJ entered Jade a few posts ago. I thought it would be very stupid if the doctor did nothing so I made a post.

I will leave this up to @Gravity to decide if the post does or doesn't fit with her character's timeline. As far as I can tell, @Desdemona 's post works, though you might want to be clearer in future that you're backtracking a little to cover ground already spoken about from another character's perspective.

Yeah yeah, I'm fine with it. Now that it's been explained I think it was a great idea. As long as in the future you make things like that more clear, I think maybe your Charrie could begin to suspect it wasn't bandits or something? Idk, just a possibility. Pm me if you're interested @Desdemona

Sounds good! @Gravity

Anyone gonna post?

I feel like such garbage starting an SB and then not being able to be a part of it, especially given the interest you've all shown but I'm currently visiting friends and family on the other side of the country and have less than adequate time to post (((( Nonetheless, I will try to piece together a post through a few days of whatever time I have to write. So sorry

I simply feel that it is too soon for me to post again. I guess I could do one with Mingan going into the general store.

Guys, come on. Let's not let this die.

Well...I don't know what others have planned but there is supposed to be a celebration at the bar that evening. We could always move to that point. The bandits would be arriving around then.

I seriously think our characters should have a chance to interact with and get to know each other. We already had a pretty recent raid, so I think this should just be a random party with everyone at the bar

I'm sorry I haven't been taking a more active role in my own SB lol, vacation is a double sided blade it turns out..... But I am liking the ideas you all are coming up with! A bar meet-up would be a great way for people to get to know one another I'll MAKE time to get my charries in on it as well, however brief

I'm okay with that. @HazelGrace16 maybe Eleanora could get a bit tipsy and mess around on the piano