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Tue Jul 19, 2016 10:39 pm
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@TheSilverFox, @StupidSoup, and @Tortwag, your rooms have been assigned! I have also taken the liberty of putting Yi-Ze and Marala in room two, so just tell me if that arrangement doesn't suit you, @Buggiedude2340 and @Rydia.

@SpiritedWolfe and Soup, it is an actual castle, so I'm not at all surprised you're lost. I'll take care to make the characters feel the same way, so don't worry. Herakles is the grumpy, asocial kind, so I'll give him room ten, which is away from everyone else, and then Midas can stay in room eight if @Poopsie doesn't want anything else. For some reason, nobody wants room five, so I'll have Hekate comment on that and leave it vacant for a specific character that'll be joining relatively soon.

If you have any particular things you want me to explain, please don't be afraid to ask. I'll also have Hekate emphasise it during the tour just for good measure.
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Wed Jul 20, 2016 12:59 am
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Sounds good to me! By the way, at what point should the next post end? Am I still leaving room for another limo post or getting my group all the way to the mansion?
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Wed Jul 20, 2016 12:20 pm
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That room suits me!
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Wed Jul 20, 2016 2:01 pm
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For now I'll just study the map and get used to the layout. Methinks it's hte main reason why a few of us might be confused by it, and as you mentioned, it IS an actual freakin' castle XD

Here's to hope it's any less hard than trying to memorize Paris' underground metro paths... *gulp*
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Wed Jul 20, 2016 2:11 pm
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@Buggiedude2340, you can have the post end where everyone disembarks from the limousines. If you like, you can also describe the front of the castle. @Poopsie and @SpiritedWolfe may then post for Midas or Herakles, but if they don't want to, I'll go ahead and start with Hekate's tour. Actually, I can start with that before then already. I just have to finish my post for the OS first.

@Tortwag, believe me, I felt the same way when I first looked at it. But after spending a few hours studying it, I was more at ease with the layout. You'll all get used to it eventually.

PS: If anyone was confused by the orientation of the floor and its wings, keep in mind the complete structure looks like \_/, but upside down, since the castle faces south.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Wed Jul 20, 2016 2:14 pm
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@AstralHunter: I'm pretty sure I asked for bedroom number 5, not bedroom number 3. <.<
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

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Wed Jul 20, 2016 2:15 pm
SpiritedWolfe says...



I'll probably wait to post until after the tour because things've started to get hectic for me xD I'll try to catch up on posts soon, since I haven't had time to read the last few >.<
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Wed Jul 20, 2016 3:34 pm
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Well, aren't we being Mr Upstairs-With-A-Big-Bathroom, @TheSilverFox? :P

Nah, I'm kidding. But if you want the third largest room in the castle, you can bet you're going to work for it! XD

@SpiritedWolfe, that's fine! That means I'm after Buggie if Poopsie doesn't want to post.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Wed Jul 20, 2016 5:13 pm
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WE HAVE A NEW HORSE POKÉMON, PEOPLE!

Ahem.

So, six new Pokémon have been revealed, bringing the total of new Pokémon up to 25. The new spoiler shows the current list of native Pokémon for those who are interested.

Spoiler! :
Starters
♦ Rowlet (Grass/Flying) - Grass Quill Pokémon: Overgrow
♥♥ ???
♥♥♥ ???
♦ Litten (Fire) - Fire Cat Pokémon: Blaze
♥♥ ???
♥♥♥ ???
♦ Popplio (Water) - Sea Lion Pokémon: Torrent
♥♥ ???
♥♥♥ ???

New Wild Pokémon
♦ Pickipek (Normal/Flying) - Woodpecker Pokémon: Keen Eye/Skill Link
♥♥ ???
♥♥♥ ???
♦ Yungoos (Normal) - Loitering Pokémon: Stakeout/Strong Jaw
♥♥ ???
♦ Grubbin (Bug) - Larva Pokémon: Swarm
♥♥ Charjabug (Bug/Electric) - Battery Pokémon: Battery
♥♥♥ Vikavolt (Bug/Electric) - Stag Beetle Pokémon: Levitate
♦ Drampa (Normal/Dragon) - Placid Pokémon: Berserk/Sap Sipper
♦ Bruxish (Water/Psychic) - Gnash Teeth Pokémon: Dazzling/Strong Jaw
♦ Cutiefly (Bug/Fairy) - Bee Fly Pokémon: Honey Gather/Shield Dust
♥♥ ???
♦ Togedemaru (Electric/Steel) - Roly-Poly Pokémon: Iron Barbs/Lightning Rod
♦ Rockruff (Rock) - Puppy Pokémon: Keen Eye/Vital Spirit [WOLF! I want one! <3]
♥♥ ???
♦ Komala (Normal) - Drowsing Pokémon: Comatose
♥♥ ???
♦ Salandit (Poison/Fire) - Toxic Lizard Pokémon: Corrosion
♥♥ ???
♦ Wimpod (Bug/Water) - Turn Tail Pokémon: Wimp Out
♥♥ ???
♦ Bounsweet (Grass) - Fruit Pokémon: Leaf Guard/Oblivious
♥♥ ???
♦ Comfey (Fairy) - Posy Picker Pokémon: Flower Veil/Triage
♦ Mudsdale (Ground) - Draft Horse Pokémon: Own Tempo/Stamina [HORSE! Wait, I already said that. Nothing beats a unicorn, though.]
♦ Bewear (Normal/Fighting) - Strong Arm Pokémon: Fluffy/Klutz
♦ Mimikyu (Ghost/Fairy) - Disguise Pokémon: Disguise

Old Wild Pokémon
♦ Ledyba (Bug/Flying) - Five Star Pokémon: Swarm/Early Bird (Rattled)
♥♥ Ledian (Bug/Flying) - Five Star Pokémon: Swarm/Early Bird (Iron Fist)
♦ Zubat (Poison/Flying) - Bat Pokémon: Inner Focus (Inflitrator)
♥♥ Golbat (Poison/Flying) - Bat Pokémon: Inner Focus (Infiltrator)
♥♥♥ Crobat (Poison/Flying) - Bat Pokémon: Inner Focus (Infiltrator)
♦ Skarmory (Steel/Flying) - Armour Bird Pokémon: Keen Eye/Sturdy (Weak Armour)
♦ Eevee (Normal) - Evolution Pokémon: Run Away/Adaptability (Anticipation)
♥♥ Vaporeon, Jolteon, Flareon, Espeon, Umbreon, Leafeon, Glaceon, Sylveon [there will be no new Evolutions in Sun or Moon :'( ]
♦ Lillipup (Normal) - Puppy Pokémon: Vital Spirit/Pickup (Run Away)
♥♥ Herdier (Normal) - Loyal Dog Pokémon: Intimidate/Sand Rush (Scrappy)
♥♥♥ Stoutland (Normal) - Big-Hearted Pokémon: Intimidate/Sand Rush (Scrappy)
♦ Poliwag (Water) - Tadpole Pokémon: Water Absorb/Damp (Swift Swim)
♥♥ Poliwhirl (Water) - Tadpole Pokémon: Water Absorb/Damp (Swift Swim)
♥♥♥ Poliwrath (Water/Fighting) - Tadpole Pokémon: Water Absorb/Damp (Swift Swim)
♥♥♥ Politoed (Water) - Frog Pokémon: Water Absorb/Damp (Drizzle)
♦ Miltank (Normal) - Milk Cow Pokémon: Thick Fat/Scrappy (Sap Sipper)
♦ Kangaskhan (Normal) - Parent Pokémon: Early Bird/Scrappy (Inner Focus)
♦ Pancham (Fighting) - Playful Pokémon: Iron Fist/Mold Breaker (Scrappy)
♥♥ Pangoro (Fighting/Dark) - Daunting Pokémon: Iron Fist/Mold Breaker (Scrappy)
♦ Tauros (Normal) - Wild Bull Pokémon: Intimidate/Anger Point (Sheer Force)
♦ Lapras (Water/Ice) - Transport Pokémon: Water Absorb/Shell Armour (Hydration)
♦ Carvanha (Water/Dark) - Savage Pokémon: Rough Skin (Speed Boost)
♥♥ Sharpedo (Water/Dark) - Brutal Pokémon: Rough Skin (Speed Boost)
♦ Roselia (Grass/Poison) - Thorn Pokémon: Natural Cure/Poison Point (Leaf Guard)
♥♥ Roserade (Grass/Poison) - Bouquet Pokémon: Natural Cure/Poison Point (Technician)
♦ Growlithe (Fire) - Puppy Pokémon: Intimidate/Flash Fire (Justified)
♥♥ Arcanine (Fire) - Legendary Pokémon: Intimidate/Flash Fire (Justified)
♦ Electabuzz (Electric) - Electric Pokémon: Static (Vital Spirit)
♥♥ Electivire (Electric) - Thunderbolt Pokémon: Motor Drive (Vital Spirit)
♦ Murkrow (Dark/Flying) - Darkness Pokémon: Insomnia/Super Luck (Prankster)
♥♥ Honchkrow (Dark/Flying) - Big Boss Pokémon: Insomnia/Super Luck (Moxie)
♦ Snorlax (Normal) - Sleeping Pokémon: Immunity/Thick Fat (Gluttony)
♦ Machop (Fighting) - Superpower Pokémon: Guts/No Guard (Steadfast)
♥♥ Machoke (Fighting) - Superpower Pokémon: Guts/No Guard (Steadfast)
♥♥♥ Machamp (Fighting) - Superpower Pokémon: Guts/No Guard (Steadfast)
♦ Spinarak (Bug/Poison) - String Spit Pokémon: Swarm/Insomnia (Sniper)
♥♥ Ariados (Bug Poison) - Long Leg Pokémon: Swarm/Insomnia (Sniper)

Legendaries
♦ Solgaleo (Steel/Psychic) - Sunne Pokémon: Full Metal Body
♦ Lunala (Psychic/Ghost) - Moone Pokémon: Shadow Veil
♦ Zygarde 10% Forme (Dragon/Ground) - Order Pokémon: Aura Break/Power Construct
♣♣ Zygarde 50% Forme (Dragon/Ground) - Order Pokémon: Aura Break/Power Construct
♣♣♣ Zygarde 100% Forme (Dragon/Ground) - Order Pokémon: Power Construct
♦ Tapu Koko (Electric/Fairy) - Land Spirit Pokémon: Electric Surge
♦ Megearna (Steel/Fairy) - Artificial Pokémon: Soul-Heart
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Tue Jul 26, 2016 4:42 am
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Ventomology says...



I DID IT. FINALLY.

@Tortwag, @Rydia, and @StupidSoup, if I have misrepresented any of your characters, please let me know, and I'll fix it!
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They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
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Tue Jul 26, 2016 6:57 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



That gives me a perfect excuse to finally catch up on posts.

@Buggiedude2340 'kay! I'm sure it'll be fine.
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Tue Jul 26, 2016 11:05 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



That was a most entertaining post, @Buggiedude2340! You nailed the surfing for radio stations, and Hippolyta's awkwardness is adorable. I think I'll be fine with portraying her, Ariadne, Daedalus, and Achilles, but with the rest, I'll have to rely on intuition and the details in the character profile. (I'm so glad now that I asked for those.)
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Wed Jul 27, 2016 12:47 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



@Buggiedude2340 Well that was insanely cute. I'd feel stupidly picky if I said anything at this point, because yeah frankly, the post was super nice, and everyone seemed to be portrayed in an enjoyable way, so yeah I have no problem with the way you used Daedalus - hopefully the others were portrayed just as well according to their creators.

@AstralHunter yeah, you did well, 'cause watching the details being used in posts is super refreshing.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:27 am
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Rydia says...



@Buggiedude2340 It was a beautiful post *snugs*
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Mon Aug 01, 2016 5:14 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



There are no words to describe how glorious this video is. You must watch it to understand. In the meantime, I'll be freaking out in my room.

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But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.








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