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Tue May 03, 2016 1:03 am
Chaser says...



I want to keep Wendell out of the action for the beginning, as a general rule. Right now, he's just the team idiot who happens to be an expert in survival everything.
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Tue May 03, 2016 1:03 am
HazelGrace16 says...



@backroadstraveler Are you talking about the attack on the group? I dont know what most of the action would be except for families panicking about injured loved ones.
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Tue May 03, 2016 1:18 am
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sorry the post is late. I have the APUSH test friday so...cramming
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Tue May 03, 2016 2:48 am
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@HazelGrace16 yeah and I know it wouldn't a ton- wasn't actually planning on involving Gabe. However, he doesn't have an official job quite yet, and everyone important would be busy with the attack, so he was gonna figure out his first non-hospital meal on his own.
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Wed May 04, 2016 7:47 pm
Lael says...



@StupidSoup were you intending in your post for Marcus to be the one who attacked the elite group? There's nothing wrong with that, but if you are, I would like to remind you that there were a little more than 5 people (guys and girls) and Kris Chang, their leader, was hurt very, very badly. Also, one person died. Either way, Marcus must be one really strong guy.
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Wed May 04, 2016 11:10 pm
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Naw it wasn't an elite group. Elites aren't the only people that go out into the field right? It was intended to be either a rogue group or just patrol people if that's a thing.

I might be wrong though :/
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Wed May 04, 2016 11:43 pm
Lael says...



Okay, because I was pretty sure those guys weren't the elites, but just wanted to be sure. Makes it all the more mysterious though. ;)
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Sat May 07, 2016 2:51 am
Lael says...



Aww I wish I had one of my characters still left to post, so I could make them argue with Takeda or something, since he seems to disapprove of things in the base. But I feel that Jenna would dislike him more, since her father is the overall strategy person of the base (but he IS a genius at it). Oh well, there's always time for that later. ;)

@HazelGrace16 is Sir Jones the military leader or the elite trainer? Or both?
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Sat May 07, 2016 3:34 am
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Both basically @EmmaKi
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Thu May 19, 2016 3:34 pm
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Are we going to wait for the last people to post or does this conclude the round? I don't mind waiting a little longer but I think it would be good for them to at least tell us if/when they will post.
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Thu May 19, 2016 3:52 pm
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In this SB I am not requiring a constant cycle of posts. Post when you feel your charrie needs to post, and if you need someone to post before you do then message them on here :)
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Thu May 19, 2016 9:04 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



Posted! Fairly impactful plot wise. Just for the time line of things at least
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Sat Jun 04, 2016 9:11 pm
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Mon Jun 06, 2016 5:41 pm
backroadstraveler says...



Ok so I've been trying to get Gabe involved with some of the other characters in my post forever and am like seriously stuck. Does anyone have any suggestions on how I could do that?
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Mon Jun 06, 2016 6:48 pm
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Well my charries returning to the base so maybe something can happen there
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