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Tue Mar 29, 2016 5:04 pm
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Wolfi says...



Accepted! ^^
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Tue Mar 29, 2016 5:52 pm
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LordZeus says...



Great thanks! BTW @LeftyWriter I was wondering, given your character's interests, he may have hears of mine before? Perhaps he'd even be a fan, or read his book? Just a thought.

@Wolfie36 given that my character is a very hard to find celebrity (and excellent at staying hidden from the media, as I mentioned in my CP), and yours is journalist, I was thinking that perhaps Annabelle would be very surprised and excited on seeing Ax, and may hope to get an exclusive interview. Maybe they'd even have met before. Just throwing ideas around.
  





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Tue Mar 29, 2016 6:29 pm
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Well, Annabelle isn't actually a journalist and most likely she wouldn't have heard of him. Maybe that will make Ax surprised and he'll be a bit suspicious. She'll be playing the part, however, and will probably find a way to interview each of the characters.
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Wed Mar 30, 2016 5:22 am
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Sooo, I'm leaving for my first plane trip tomorrow, and maybe I'll be able to write my Polk post then. Otherwise it'll be done very soon!
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Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Thu Mar 31, 2016 4:35 pm
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Hey @LeftyWriter what are your thoughts on what I said about your character in my last dt post?
  





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Fri Apr 01, 2016 7:38 am
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That post is kind of rough, due to the fact that I could only work on bits and pieces of it in between traveling. If I misrepresented any of your characters, please let me know!

Whoever posts next is more than welcome to finish off the round and thus dock the cruise ship on the island and get all our characters on land. Remember to unload Polk's high tech set of Jeeps! (Jurassic Park can't be Jurassic Park without those Jeeps.)
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Thu Apr 07, 2016 1:36 am
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Wolfi says...



Nice post, @TheForgottenKing!

I posted the next assignment. It's open-ended nature will allow for each of you to take the reins of the plot and steer our characters into some delicious dino obstacles. Yay!

@Noelle, @Birkhoff, and @LordZeus - you guys have yet to post your cruise ship posts. If life is too much right now, that's completely fine. ;) If you have the time, however, post within the next few days so that we can finish up the round. Otherwise we'll just proceed to the next one.
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Mon Apr 11, 2016 6:53 pm
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Posted!
@Noelle @Steggy @Wolfical I mentioned your characters in my post, so please tell me if you want me to change anything.

BTW just so you know, I might change my writing POV later in the SB, as I usually write in first person. I hope that's okay!
  





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Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:06 pm
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I think you did a nice job using Jorge in your writing, @LordZeus. I think Ax and him will be good buddies during this adventure. ;)
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Mon Apr 11, 2016 11:08 pm
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Nice, Zeus! Annabelle was represented nicely. I laughed at the good-looking part xD

First person is fine. I only went with third to match the POV of the books.

@Steggy, would you be interested in writing the next post, docking the ship and beginning Round 2?
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Mon Apr 11, 2016 11:50 pm
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I'll be glad to. ^^
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Wed Apr 13, 2016 8:19 pm
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Wolfical wrote:Challenged Adventurer(s): @LeftyWriter, @Steggy, @TheForgottenKing, @Wolfie36, @TinyJarStoredDreams, @TheSilverFox, @Birkhoff, @Noelle, @Jhinx, @ScarlettFire
Storybook: Jurassic Paradise
The Challenge: Simply write one or two posts in the following thirty days from the time of this post, following the Assignment Message Board's requirements. (It's been updated, so take a peek!)
Completion Time: 1 or 2 posts in thirty days
Credits Awarded: 1 point for 1 post or 3 points for 2 posts.


Your challenge expires in four days, so if you have completed it already, be sure to claim your credits in the SB B&C thread; if you haven't, but really want those credits, you have to post soon! ;)
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
β€” Paul the Apostle

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Thu Apr 14, 2016 1:50 am
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ScarlettFire says...



@AstralHunter I quit this SB some time ago. Like a whole month. Soooo, I think this challenge no longer applies to me.

(I'm sorry I dropped out, btw! I'd love to come back but I'm dealing with some stuff right now, so it looks like it's not happening.)
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Thu Apr 14, 2016 1:57 am
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@AstralHunter, thanks for the reminder! :)

It's all good, @ScarlettFire ~
John 14:27:
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Sun Apr 17, 2016 1:48 pm
LordZeus says...



So...who's posting next?
  








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