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Tue Jun 28, 2016 8:23 pm
Wolfi says...



I like that, @TheSilverFox. If the gang still doesn't know what happened to the ship, they'll soon start moving in that general direction anyway, and meet up with Nigel.

Don't apologize. The splendor of your posts are always worth the wait. ;)
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Tue Jun 28, 2016 8:52 pm
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Alrighty! Sounds good, @Wolfical. I'll be writing the post this week and have it either by Friday or Saturday.
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Mon Jul 04, 2016 12:33 pm
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*poke* hey guys, what's happening here?
  





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Tue Jul 05, 2016 11:56 pm
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err...basically...I thought I was going to have more time, and then...I didn't?

...I honestly don't know. Time flew by, and then a few old friends showed up, and the Fourth of July, and swimming practice, and on and on and on. I really cannot ask you to bear with me anymore, but I'm honestly not sure when I can continue writing. I might be able to tomorrow night, and then I'll have to vanish between the 10th and 14th. Maybe then I could find some more time? It's going to take a while, regardless, so I have to apologize for that. I know what I want to write, but finding the time to write seems to be the challenge. *sighs*
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

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Wed Jul 06, 2016 1:24 am
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That's totally fine, @TheSilverFox. Don't be stressed out about this.
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Sat Jul 09, 2016 6:24 pm
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Hey @Wolfical I was just wondering if you were planning to post about annabelle and Ax's time in the gyrosphere. I'm rather to see what would happen, as well as knowing Annabelle's opinion of Ax after he saved her life. Now, I'm not pushing you to post for that, but I was just wondering if you were thinking of it.
  





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Sat Jul 09, 2016 8:07 pm
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@Dinosaur was supposed to post next, I believe, but since she's taking a break from YWS I'll go ahead and post next for Annabelle.
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Mon Jul 11, 2016 10:59 am
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Awesome @Wolfical, I can't wait to read it!
  





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Sat Jul 16, 2016 4:32 am
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I'm really sorry guys, but I can't finish that post until Sunday. What happened to that Summer-gives-you-more-free-time philosophy? :P
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Sat Jul 16, 2016 4:41 am
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That's fine @Wolfical. I always thought that that philosophy was wrong. Summer gives your parents more time to make you do chores should be the right philosophy :P
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Sat Jul 16, 2016 4:47 am
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So true! xD Thanks for understanding.
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Sun Jul 17, 2016 9:47 pm
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Finally posted! @LordZeus, let me know if anything about Ax needs to be changed.

I had an idea for the "survivalist's plan" - it involves leaving everything that smells like humans (except the humans themselves) at the hotel and using Isla Nublar's river system to reach the southern part of the island. That means the group will have to leave all their belongings or else get them and themselves covered in mud/gasoline/something else so the dinos can't catch their track. This could keep the dinos concentrated around the hotel while the group flees to the southern area and waits for help to arrive.

Spoiler! :
(Kinda like what Owen did in Jurassic World when he poured the gasoline on himself under the car.)
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Thu Jul 28, 2016 1:23 am
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I've already expressed how much I enjoyed that post to you via IM, @TheSilverFox, but once again, fabulous post! For the rest of you (Fox and I did some planning) it looks like Nigel is going to do his best to hide in the tree by the river, and use shards of glass to start a fire and alert the group.

Now, don't you think it's about time Polk dies already? At the top of your screen, you'll see that a new poll (or should I say Pollk?) has been set up in the DT. ;)
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Fri Aug 05, 2016 4:16 am
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We'll get this up and running after the Olympics are over (perhaps I'll post for Polk one last time). There was a tie in our "Pollk" from last time, so I've initiated a revote ~
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Sun Aug 14, 2016 9:34 am
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LordZeus says...



Hey guys sorry I haven't been online recently, but I've just started a new internship so I've been rather busy! Just so you know, I have a post planned and will post as soon as I can. My planned post will show Ax and a few others along with expendable guards going to investigate the southern area of the island to see if it is safe enough to call everyone to join them. Thanks for your patience!

P.S. @Wolfical BTW I think torn to pieces by velociraptors would be a better option thn simply pushed out of a window? Idk but I think Polk deserves a more gruesome death than simply falling. Just a thought.
  








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