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Sat Dec 10, 2016 9:41 pm
Wolfi says...



Nice post, Zeus! :)

Just want to make sure I have the chronicle of events right~
So Carson returned from the old hotel with three people, and met Jorge, Annabelle, and Chris at the rubble, and then they went looking for Ax and Nigel?
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Sun Dec 11, 2016 3:18 am
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LordZeus says...



Well yes, except that they were just exploring the area for survivors, not looking for Ax and Nigel specifically @Wolfical.
  





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Thu Dec 15, 2016 3:54 am
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So...who's posting next?
  





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Thu Dec 15, 2016 4:20 am
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If @LeftyWriter's too busy, I'll be able to soon enough.
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Thu Dec 15, 2016 4:53 am
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I'm working like, 54 hours between now and Christmas Eve, so I will be a little tight on time until then, but I will try to post when I can.

Wolfie, if you have a post in mind, you're certainly welcome to post before me.
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Thu Dec 15, 2016 4:57 am
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Sure thing - I might be able to this weekend, and if not, shortly thereafter.

I've meant to say this before, Lefty, but I love Hunter's Santa hat. d:
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Thu Dec 15, 2016 5:05 am
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Aww thanks. I love it too! :santa:
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Wed Dec 28, 2016 1:00 am
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Hey, I should be able to have some time to catch up on posts and write one from Christopher's POV now that the holidays are mostly over. I will try to have one up by this weekend--early next week at the latest.
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Wed Dec 28, 2016 5:18 am
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Nice! I've been super busy lately as well, but I expect to have one up before the weekend comes.
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Sat Dec 31, 2016 8:14 pm
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Sorry for taking so long!

No action in this one. In fact, it's quite boring. I guess our poor characters needed a rest.

Not that freezing in a cave is much better. ;-;
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Thu Jan 05, 2017 12:12 am
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Lefty says...



Hey! I finally finished catching up on posts. Sorry it took me so long.

I have an idea for Chris's post, but I wanted to double check on some things before I start on it. Now that they've all reunited, what happens now?

Currently, they don't have a safe place to stay. Is there a place they could call for help? Or, way earlier in the DT, Wolfie mentioned that the gift shops would have some food left-over. Should they head there to replenish their supplies? Or did someone have something else in mind? Now that they're back together, what is their next step?
Also, other than Nigel having a broken arm and Chris having some cuts and bruises, is anyone else injured?
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Thu Jan 05, 2017 5:49 am
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As for the injuries - not that I know of. I suppose we can all vouch for our own characters, and I can say that Annabelle is just fine.

Yes, the gift shops! Y'know where the final epic battle takes place between the T-rex and the I-rex in Jurassic World? I think that would be a great place for the group to be heading toward.
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Fri Jan 06, 2017 11:09 pm
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Thanks, Wolfie! I'll have a post up in the next couple of hours. :)
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Sat Jan 07, 2017 1:19 am
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Posted! I mentioned your characters a lot, @Wolfical and @LordZeus. Sorry it took me so long to post! I hope you guys like it and let me know if you'd like me to change anything.
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Sat Jan 07, 2017 6:08 am
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Wolfi says...



Aww, what a sweet post! It was a really nice deviation from all the action we've been having. Nice character building, Lefty. Chris is awesome.
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Whaaat? Page three??? Whooo!
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  








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