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Thu Jun 30, 2016 4:00 am
LordZeus says...



Hey @backroadstraveler nice post! :D

Just one thing: I saw that you didn't mention Oren, who was last seen paralysed on the floor in front of her, before she started to help him get to the infirmary. That's okay, but it's just that I was hoping for a continuation from that scene so that I could have some more structure for my next post.
  





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Thu Jun 30, 2016 12:16 pm
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I'm so sorry! I was trying to go chronologically off of Gravity's post; I can edit my post to address that if you want @LordZeus
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Thu Jun 30, 2016 12:36 pm
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I'm hoping to get a Chris post out on Sunday and can pick that up as well ^^
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Thu Jun 30, 2016 2:46 pm
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I would like that @backroadstraveler. Thanks :D I can't wait to read your post either, @Rydia .
  





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Sun Jul 03, 2016 4:54 pm
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Posted for Cora! I'll be around more now, I promise. :P
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Wed Jul 06, 2016 11:42 am
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Hey guys! I'm back! I'll post ASAP. It's too late here now but I'll do it either while babysitting or puppy sitting tomorrow. Night guys!
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Wed Jul 06, 2016 5:14 pm
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@Gravity

Love the post, but... how is Oren, or for that matter, the nurse touching her without being reduced to screaming heaps of fear? Cora influences dreams- her power is... er.... more powerful when she's unconscious...
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Thu Jul 07, 2016 2:50 am
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@TheCrimsonLady

Um...
totally forgot about that. Does that mean I need to delete the entire post?
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Thu Jul 07, 2016 10:55 am
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Er, I have no idea. But.... maybe rectify the second half?

I suppose you could just have Aaron and O'Malley touch her. Anyone else who was remotely close should, by all rights, end up a screaming heap on the floor. Think, like, a radius of two feet.
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Thu Jul 07, 2016 12:47 pm
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Actually @TheCrimsonLady I was planning to post with Oren being able to see the illusions (as he was helping to carry Cora) but finding a way to ignore and deal with them. Would that work?
  





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Mon Jul 11, 2016 9:59 am
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LordZeus says...



Posted again, guys!

@TheCrimsonLady @Rydia @backroadstraveler I mentioned Cora, Chris and Lilah in my post. Please tell me if you want me to change anything!
  





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Tue Aug 02, 2016 4:53 am
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Tue Aug 02, 2016 8:40 am
Rydia says...



Zzzzzzzzz

(Maybe on Friday?)
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Tue Aug 02, 2016 7:41 pm
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Guys, I am so, so, sorry about not being active at all. Summer makes it super hard for me to write. I will definitely be here when school starts again. :(
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Sun Aug 07, 2016 6:10 pm
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@Rydia Oh. My. Gooooooddddddd, I am so sorry! I've been away from the internet for a little more than a week now after a long period of family visiting and now I've been away for so long. Ugh. I'm terrible. I'm also writing up a post for Jo right now.
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