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Tue Feb 09, 2016 9:10 pm
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Story of my life :3 It's slowly happening. Busy life exploded in my face and I've been going through a creative block for the past few weeks. If I don't get my profile done by the weekend I'm gonna drop. No use holding everyone else up because I can't get things done.
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Tue Feb 09, 2016 9:16 pm
Steggy says...



That's perfectly fine. ^^ Completely understandable.
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Thu Feb 11, 2016 8:43 am
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Omni says...



So I'm about 800 words into my intro post! All of my tests for college are done, and I'm free tomorrow. So expect the post soon
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Thu Feb 11, 2016 11:05 am
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Awesome possum! Can't wait to read it. ^^
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Mon Feb 15, 2016 11:38 pm
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Sorry about the long wait on my post! It's done though, hope you like it <3
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Mon Feb 15, 2016 11:44 pm
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Wonderful posts, guys! I love the characteristic of the Billionaire, even though we know nothing about him.

Also, another thing, I might make a post about the Billionaire or something. Perhaps he'll be a NPC. I haven't decided.
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Mon Feb 15, 2016 11:54 pm
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Omni says...



If you want my opinion (I'm giving it anyway! xD)

I don't think you should make a post centering around the Billionaire for now (maybe even at all) because these little snippets about him are an amazing way to give him personality. Making a CT or a post about him would take away that novelty.
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Mon Feb 15, 2016 11:58 pm
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Steggy says...



I was going to ask what you guys thought...

Since Reise and Noelle left, that just leaves Rydia, me and you. And I agree- the little snippets build up that suspense feeling. Maybe somewhere along the line, after a big event or something, I'll add a part from the POV of him.
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Tue Feb 16, 2016 12:09 am
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I think we should try to get more people in the SB, I'm having the same problem with mine (if you didn't already know xD)
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Sat Mar 12, 2016 12:46 am
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Alrighty guys, so since everyone has gotten their gift perhaps when writing your post, add something to show what is inside. Make it surprising.

I want to get this storybook back up and running.
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Thu Mar 24, 2016 1:21 am
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Omni says...



Sorry I completely forgot about this SB over spring break! I have a question: are all of the gifts in the box the same? Do they have something to do with the problem we've given our characters?
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Thu Mar 24, 2016 1:36 am
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Not necessarily. The gifts can range from anything, really. Like a bomb or even a puppy (with rabies). The possibilities are endless - just limit it so it can relate back to the problem the character has. And as I said before, make it surprising. ;)
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Thu Mar 24, 2016 2:13 am
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Alrighty xD
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Mon Apr 11, 2016 10:48 pm
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I just got to read that post but it was really good, @Steggy!

I'm currently working on my post right now. It's going, but slowly. Currently, the "gift" the Gradyn got is a voice recorder -with no batteries.

I have a couple of questions: are we going to get multiple gifts as the story progresses? Also, are we accepting/trying to get people in here?
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Mon Apr 11, 2016 11:32 pm
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Another question - we've alluded this whole situation to a chessboard. If then, there's two sides to a chess game, is/will there be another side that the Billionaire is fighting or facing? Can we see that presence at all in his POV?
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