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Thu Nov 12, 2015 4:46 am
Lumi says...



Sure. I looked through your past SB posts--so know that three particular rules carry over between all of my SBs:

1. Third person
2. Past-tense
3. No backwards writing
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Thu Nov 12, 2015 4:48 am
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@Basil --> Is Evi related to Kite? A half-sister?

I could work with that. Especially given her young age.
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Thu Nov 12, 2015 6:48 am
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Can I have your agender? D:
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Thu Nov 12, 2015 6:58 am
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Yesssss you may.

BUT since that means we'll have seven main-team, one or two will be left as lookout, guards, on a sub-mission, or otherwise utilized in a B-Story so I can maintain my phobia of large casts.
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Fri Nov 13, 2015 7:50 am
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@Lumi ... I don't know how I'll go with past tense, but I will do my best ^^
Uhm ... and what do you mean by backwards writing?

As to Ev being related to Kite ... dunno. They could be?
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2015 8:06 am
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Let's say one person writes a post containing a sequence of events.

Let's call that sequence A through F.

Backwards writing is when a second person writes a post with a sequence of events that covers things already covered in post #1.

We'll call this sequence D through H.

The way my storybooks run, it goes:

Person 1: A through F
Person 2: G through K
Person 3: L through P

and so on.
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Fri Nov 13, 2015 8:16 am
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Right, got it. I prefer not to do that anyway ^^

Also ... I hate seeming like the fool, but with the trope, how do you get them to be sentences instead of the actual urls?
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2015 8:58 am
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Hey Basil, it's [url=put the url here]Put the sentence here[/url] :)

Also regarding side adventures, Sophie is going to be a base body, so someone different can come hang with her each week. They can open a Fine Southern Lady's Supernatural Detective Agency or something. It'll be tons of fun.
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Fri Nov 13, 2015 4:59 pm
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StellaThomas wrote:Hey Basil, it's [url=put the url here]Put the sentence here[/url] :)

Also regarding side adventures, Sophie is going to be a base body, so someone different can come hang with her each week. They can open a Fine Southern Lady's Supernatural Detective Agency or something. It'll be tons of fun.


Sounds like a demon tea- parlour :D
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Fri Nov 13, 2015 11:31 pm
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i feel like i should be saying something about Chel but i have diddly squat right now.
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Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:23 am
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Anyone want to have a plotting/chemistry session?

As I did with TBS, I want to flesh out these characters and perfect our chemistry pre-evolution before launch.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:33 pm
Blackwood says...



Sure thing Rum, I'm in.
I also need to start making up that profile.
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Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:41 pm
Steggy says...



I'm in for that. c:
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Wed Nov 18, 2015 12:56 am
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Sure, it'd be a good idea to get the feel or Ev's character too
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Fri Nov 20, 2015 3:21 pm
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I'll think about thinking about setting that up.

IN THE MEANTIME, @Blackwood and @Auxiira, the whip is about to be cracked.

DON'T MAKE IT CRACK.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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