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Thu Nov 12, 2015 2:50 pm
TheSilverFox says...



Not if I get to yours first, Numbers. :twisted:
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Thu Nov 12, 2015 4:48 pm
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Robusto says...



Not yet. I'm going to wait and see if I can get a few more people to join before starting.
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2015 2:15 am
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Robusto says...



@15253, @Verser, @TheSilverFox: All your character's have been accepted. Now you just need to write an opening post, introducing your character.
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2015 2:29 am
StupidSoup says...



K. Expect it Friday or this weekend
I have a license that lets me solve aids - A friend of mine


Here Comes the Birdyyyy ~Poopsie


You gotta have the confidence of a gazelle running through a herd of lions - TK Sharp


I was once Numbers

Now I am Soup
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2015 2:51 am
Robusto says...



Splendid. Can't wait to see it.
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2015 2:56 am
TheSilverFox says...



@Robusto: When it comes to the topic of the opening post, is it just to introduce them, or can we have the Shrall invasion take place as well? I'm sorry if that sounds like a stupid question. <.<
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2015 3:01 am
Robusto says...



The opening post is supposed to feature the Shrall invasion, yes.
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2015 5:36 am
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Poopsie says...



@DeeDemesne @Lumi @AstralHunter @jumpingsheep @Stegosaurus

@Blaspherica
The Poopsiest.

JOIN THE RABBIT SQUAD TODAY


:smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003

I am 100 Percent Garbage
USED TO BE VERSER
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
  





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Sat Nov 14, 2015 1:15 am
jumpingsheep says...



Hey! Could I possibly join?

This is like the 6th storybook I'm a part of but they're so much fun
hello there
  





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Sat Nov 14, 2015 1:59 am
jumpingsheep says...



I submitted a character! Let me know if I should change anything!
hello there
  





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Sat Nov 14, 2015 2:38 am
TheSilverFox says...



You can certainly join, @jumpingsheep! We could definitely do with a few new members! :D

Wow, you certainly are quite eager about the SB if you're already made a character profile (not that it's bad or anything, of course; it's great to see that you're excited about it, and I definitely look forward to writing with you in the course of this Storybook. :wink:). o-o

...Hmm...Let me see, did I forget anything?

...Oh, yes! @Robusto, I'm trying to write the introduction post. You can expect it by Sunday, although I can't exactly say, given my schedule, that I'll be true to my word about that. :-|

I do have a question, though; are the Shrall capable of speaking with other races in the universal tongue? I read through your introduction post again and, while the Shrall make a large appearance in the story, they don't seem to have any lines of dialogue other than grunts of anger or joy. To be honest, I don't really mind whether they can or can't; I can adjust my story without problem either way. I'm just curious to know a little bit more about the race, and figure out a little more how I'm going to write and organize the plot of my post.
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Sat Nov 14, 2015 3:42 am
Poopsie says...



Mr Rob, where is your cp .3.
The Poopsiest.

JOIN THE RABBIT SQUAD TODAY


:smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003

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USED TO BE VERSER
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 5:29 am
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Robusto says...



@jumpingsheep: Your. Character shall be reviewed and approved. Welcome aboard.

@TheSilverFox: Some can speak broken basic.(think caveman speech)
For the most part though, they speak their own language.
  





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Sun Nov 15, 2015 5:07 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



*breathes huge sigh of relief* Finished with the post, @Robusto! I'm proud of it, and I had a lot of fun writing about, and developing, my character, not to mention composing the plot-line of the story. And yes, I actually finished it on the deadline that I had set up, which makes me feel even better. XD

*reads word count*

(4,274 words!? I have no self-control. ;-;)
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Sun Nov 15, 2015 6:31 pm
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Robusto says...



Way to pull at my heart Silver. Great post.

@15253 @jumpingsheep and @Versed: Now it's your turn.
  








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