@Chaser I'm not okay with you messing around with any of my characters. So unless you're talking abou Fanty's or another character I don't know about... yeah. Just make sure you discuss your game plan with whoever you're messing with.
And the heart is hard to translate It has a language of its own It talks in tongues and quiet sighs, And prayers and proclamations
@Gravity@Chaser@TheForgottenKing@HazelGrace16 Just waned to let you know I'll probably double post if that's okay with you. Both my characters are set up to have some conversations that are kind of important to the plot.
@HazelGrace16 Well, if I want to be nitpicky, I'd ask you to make Copperhead a bit more subtle. It's not too much of a difference, just changing his dialogue voice to a smoother, more falsely-poetic tone. It fits more with the whole psychopathic murder-child thing I've built up.
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Hey everyone, I was thinking that maybe it wouldn't be exactly copacetic for Eva to find out about a possible uprising from Joseph yet, so maybe we could collaborate and have him get held up in the hall on his way to tell her? Maybe have something happen that could change his mind or otherwise keep him from letting her know? Just a thought Cheers!
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