I sort of have an idea. Xander and Cassia are walking one night, and they get jumped by sharks. Evangeline's idea after Cassia does something to piss her off. (I'll think of that soon)They are very overpowered even with their skills. So Crow comes in and they all defeat them. That leads to Cassias interest of why he would help them, and so on
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
Hey, guys. Um, okay, explanation. I'm so so so sorry I just vanished like that. I really should have at least told you guys I was gonna be inactive. So basically, I'm not really able to keep up with this storybook, or any storybook really. You guys aren't the only ones. Believe me, I really love the plot you guys have going and the character I have in here, but I don't think I'll be joining you guys again for a while. I might, hopefully, come back later, so if it's okay, when things slow down would I be able to join up with you guys again with Lun? She's not too engaged with any of the characters, so I think she could disappear for a bit and pop up later if it's alright with you all. So yeah. Sorry again. And @TheFantasy14 I owe you several reviews.
@Gravity, the DT is used to discuss plot things like these. No Storybooker I know peeps at other SB's DTs because they'd know there are a lot of spoilers and honestly the readers never go and read through discussion topcis either. This is a Thread for the authors of a SB to get together and plan out plot points in the story. No need to worry about spoiling it for Storybookers or readers.
whoa whoa whoa. I did not agree to this. And William doesn't even have a bow!! I could see why he's not as good as the other characters with a bow, but he's the best darn sniper in the world. With a sniper rifle. Facts people, facts!!
I'm not exactly sure that Copperhead has the strength to break anyone's bones, let alone somebody like Xander's. I mean, if he programmed a robot duplicate to take his classes for him while he retreats into a mechanical state of insanity, sure, but he's just not a very strong person.
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.
Yaaa... You probably should've checked with some people before posting that. Not really wills style, not Coppers, and not Eva's either either. Not how they've been built up at least. That kinda stuff would only lead to more retaliation and someone getting killed, but seeing as we aren't supposed to kill each other... It really alters how I'm supposed to write now. Sorry.
Really sorry about the last post. It was an idea me and Fanty came up with, but I mistakenly misinterpreted it. I feel really terrible about misusing your characters, and I'm sorry you had to burn your eyes with that post. I promise I will rewrite it, or burn it. I really really really hope this doesn't ruin my rep as a writer for you guys. Again I'm really sorry, and it was a huge mistake. Sorry. @Chaser@TheForgottenKing
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
@HazelGrace16 Mistakes are a part of improving; besides, SB characters are tricky to decipher. I barely even use other people's avatars in my posts, just to avoid misinterpretation. The overall plot of your post wasn't bad, but every writer wants to see the unique attributes in their characters brought to life. I know you're an excellent writer; just be a bit more mindful of what you do with our precious characters.
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.
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