I CLEARLY HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IS GOING ON. I THOUGHT AFTER NUMBERS POSTED, I POSTED. I AM SO CONFUZZLED.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)
You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
No, Steggy, 15253 still has to post his boss fight, after which Verser will submit his post. Only then should you post.
14/16
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law. — Paul the Apostle
Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
OH. YOU TWO BETTER POST THEN OR LUMI IS GOING TO DO SOMETHING.
Thanks for clearing that up, Hunter
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)
You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law. — Paul the Apostle
Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
I write on WriterFeedPad. Also, Hunter looks like you have one more post until you reach 16.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)
You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
VERSERMAN, KNOCK OUT TWO BOSSES IN YOUR POST, BUT MAKE THEM QUICKER THAN PREVIOUS POSTS.
Actually, I'm taking off caps now. Wowee. Um. A talk about writing action and battle sequences:
1. Dialogue is not timeline-friendly. If you stop your slaughter to talk through a ten-stage plan a la Fallyn, you're going to get ganked good.
2. While the devil is in the details, remember that the longer your sentences are, the slower the battle moves. If you want some examples of how I've trained other folks in writing action sequences, go check out The Broken Seal and watch the evolution of our fight scenes. I think the last one we did--which was me writing for an alchemist--lasted about three paragraphs, though it had dialogue in it as needed because it was primarily a lore post. We had an entire chapter based around a raid concept I had in my head, and the fight scenes there are god-tier.
Suffice it to say that you guys are going to experience a similar gauntlet.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon
I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
It would appear that way, @Poopsie. (Almost wrote @Verser.) But yes, if the characters got tired of Fallyn's long strategies, just wing it. To be honest, not even I play like that. Have them complain and then insist on improvising - tactics are just as important as strategy.
PS: Thank you, @Lumi. The all-caps was tiring to the eye.
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But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law. — Paul the Apostle
Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
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