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What force is the most fearsome?

A sentient dragon and its brood: 2; 10%

An elemental titan and its followers: 3; 15%

A utilitarian militia rampaging for survival: 2; 10%

A genocidal bishop and his clergy & laymen: 4; 20%

The fact that all of these things are going to wreck us: 9; 45%

: Total votes : 20

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Sun Nov 15, 2015 3:09 pm

BrumalHunter says...

Okay, I can start working on the post now. One last thing though - what elements does Dhisa use?

But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.

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Sun Nov 15, 2015 7:19 pm

Sassafras says...

Just the basic four - air, earth, fire, water. She favors air and fire.

A pale imitator of a girl in the sky.

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Mon Nov 23, 2015 10:04 pm

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Lumi says...

Starting on the 25th, I'm imposing my two weeks-til-forfeit rule since it'll mark a month with no posts.

Have a chill one.

I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.

-Shinji Moon

I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.

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Tue Nov 24, 2015 2:37 am

Sassafras says...

Fully in support of that, Lums. I want to post already.

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Tue Nov 24, 2015 8:59 pm

BrumalHunter says...

Aye, aye, captain! I'll speed up the writing process then.

But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.

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Thu Dec 10, 2015 3:38 am

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BrumalHunter says...

*collapses*

There! I stayed up until now (5:35 AM) to finish the post. It is rather long - understatement of the year - but I hope you enjoy it. If there is anything that needs improvement, please tell me. Now, I'm going to excuse myself to catch two hours of sleep before I have to wake up and begin to prepare for my learner's license exam.

But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.

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Thu Dec 10, 2015 3:41 am

Steggy says...

o-o

that is the longest post for an SB I've ever read ;-;

Nicely done, @AstralHunter.

You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom

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Thu Dec 10, 2015 3:59 am

StupidSoup says...

Oh Astral I saw you steal that line and I luv ya to death for it. Great job bud, you've outdone yourself.

So uh, I guess its my turn. Please wait while I frantically scroll back in the DT to see what I was covering.

I have a license that lets me solve aids - A friend of mine

Here Comes the Birdyyyy ~Poopsie

You gotta have the confidence of a gazelle running through a herd of lions - TK Sharp

I was once Numbers

Now I am Soup

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Thu Dec 10, 2015 8:28 am

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BrumalHunter says...

Thank you, @15253 and @Stegosaurus. Of course, my post simply turned out to be that long. Steg, you should by no means feel obliged to write posts exceeding two thousand words, much less ones that exceed five thousand, as this post did. (Believe it or not, that actually doesn't come anywhere near my longest SB post.

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15253, that line was too good not to recycle. Oh, and here's your post's content summary:

Lumi wrote:2. @15253: They clear their way through the ruins of Windroc and find an entryway to the sub-level of the ship. There'll probably be a gauntlet, then a fight against Boss #2. I like the idea of him being the Defense Systems Operator, so there would probably be a fight mechanic where you can turn the defenses against him to nuke his shields or something clever. Remember that we want tight and clean mechanics that would make a great game if played for real.

But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.

Gender:

Points: 1626
Reviews: 745

Thu Dec 10, 2015 8:31 am

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Lumi says...

Excellent battle post. I'm certain that I would play that game if the dungeon were real. Let's remember, though, that there's a story behind all of this for the Artoma. Probably starting with the defense operator, we'll need to get insights into what they want--just glimpses--and get an inkling of us being on the wrong side of history.

I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.

-Shinji Moon

I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.

Gender:

Points: 3485
Reviews: 161

Thu Dec 10, 2015 7:30 pm

Sassafras says...

I thought it was my turn to post next T^T Or maybe I just used the wrong posting order???

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Tue Dec 22, 2015 10:41 pm

BrumalHunter says...

@15253, you realise your posting deadline is in two days, right? If you need help, just ask.

But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.

Gender:

Points: 524
Reviews: 54

Tue Dec 22, 2015 10:47 pm

StupidSoup says...

Oh. There's a deadline. Well um, here ya go.

EDIT: There's no feasible way I can post as of now. I have to reboot the box thingy and I can only do that tonight.

I have a license that lets me solve aids - A friend of mine

Here Comes the Birdyyyy ~Poopsie

You gotta have the confidence of a gazelle running through a herd of lions - TK Sharp

I was once Numbers

Now I am Soup

Gender:

Points: 524
Reviews: 54

Thu Dec 24, 2015 7:27 am

StupidSoup says...

Well. Sorry for the crap post :\ I'll try and work on it tomorrow (and add in the boss)

I have a license that lets me solve aids - A friend of mine

Here Comes the Birdyyyy ~Poopsie

You gotta have the confidence of a gazelle running through a herd of lions - TK Sharp

I was once Numbers

Now I am Soup

Gender:

Points: 17344
Reviews: 293

Thu Dec 24, 2015 9:28 am

BrumalHunter says...

Should I wait until then before I read it?

But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.

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