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Tue Sep 22, 2015 5:34 pm
Europa says...



I did it, guys! Now you don't have to get annoyed with all those PMs! (Yeah. sorry about those...)

Link to the WFP: http://europa.writerfeedpad.com/1
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Tue Sep 22, 2015 5:39 pm
Halfbloodcheetah says...



YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS HERE!
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Tue Sep 22, 2015 5:54 pm
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Thanks! Can't wait to chat here
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Tue Sep 22, 2015 7:48 pm
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just posted. Tybalt you wanna take this one?
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Tue Sep 22, 2015 8:53 pm
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Heyo!!
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Tue Sep 22, 2015 9:44 pm
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Hey! Basically, I have an announcement for all of you. Hazel and I have been discussing a new plot-point:

At one point, Astral will capture Scarlette. I'd prefer it done after she opens up to the others a bit more, but as soon as we can agree, she's a gone girl. Astral wants to experiment on her, and see if there were any other powers "accidentally" installed during the experiment, locked in her psyche.
This plot point includes:
Guilt for Carlos (his lab file gave Astral the idea)
Development for Scarlette (A contrast between Astral's ambition and her reclusive fear)

And pretty much an excuse to bs some new ultra-powers if need be. It'll also get all the Heroes together, etc. Leon shows up, etc.

If you have any problems with it, feel free to let me know.
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Tue Sep 22, 2015 9:55 pm
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i like it! Good for me. Just a question, whats the rest doing at that time?
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Tue Sep 22, 2015 9:57 pm
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Looking for her basically. Don't worry we will develop characters more so they will have good reason to go after her.
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Wed Sep 23, 2015 1:08 am
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I think it's a great idea. also, I have something to ask about. @TheForgottenKing wants to join our gang of merry men as Scarlette's older brother, not superpowered, just looking for her. any objections?
  





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Wed Sep 23, 2015 1:56 am
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I like it , but it would be awhile till he could come in because we have the whole group bonding/torture situations. Unless we did something where Scarlette was taken in for testing when she was really young so she might not recognize him at first. He keeps it a secret at first because he doesn't know how to deal with the whole situation. It's just a suggestions but yeah :)
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Wed Sep 23, 2015 5:54 pm
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Anybody know who is supposed to post next??
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Wed Sep 23, 2015 6:25 pm
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any vaulenteers?
  





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Wed Sep 23, 2015 7:42 pm
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I think I'll take it.
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Wed Sep 23, 2015 8:25 pm
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sweet!
  








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