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Wed Sep 16, 2015 6:48 am
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@jumpingsheep you can post whenever you're ready and I'll aim to get mine in after work tonight :)

PerksOfBeingAReader wrote:@Rydia ooh hehe okay. I'm so excited! So it's fine if the older one's a guy, and the younger a girl, or...? I remember that you had put in Finch's bio that his then six year-old daughter heard everything, so I'm fine if you want me to just make the older one a girl.

(I'm having so much fun actually working with someone on a SB so cool!!)


@PerksOfBeingAReader Ooops, I missed that part! No, I don't mind either gender and love the profile! I'll change daughter to son in mine :)

@Verser @Deskro Ooooh who to kill, who to kill...

@Stegosaurus Great post - it's good to have a character who offers a different view on guns and doesn't seem to want one! Finch and her would get along just fine.
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Wed Sep 16, 2015 9:29 pm
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Great posts @Rydia and @jumpingsheep!
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Wed Sep 16, 2015 9:42 pm
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Thanks! :)
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Wed Sep 16, 2015 10:24 pm
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Thanks :D
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Wed Sep 16, 2015 11:03 pm
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@jumpingsheep ooh tensions are high, i wonder if Alex is going to spot you

@Rydia wow exciting read! I'm glad you left the story open-ended, it gives me a lot of options and I already have some good ideas brewing. I'll probably post tonight (about 10 hours from now).

EDIT: Woohoo, all posted :D. Looking forward to the next entry...
  





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Thu Sep 17, 2015 3:05 pm
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Love the post Deskro! Finch has now decided he prefers being shot to bitten but that might change once he realises his rescuer isn't even a peacekeeper and he's at their mercy with that leg :p
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Thu Sep 17, 2015 7:29 pm
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I think that I'll post in a couple of days. I think it'd be better if I waited a bit, for all the conflict to end. I think I might put something about having Tatan waiting nervously for his dad to come, or something like that. @Rydia the tattoo reference made me laugh.

Sheesh guys, you're so great at writing those fight scenes! Bravo.
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Fri Sep 18, 2015 2:08 am
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jumpingsheep says...



I'm bogged with homework right now... I'll probably post something tomorrow night-ish. @Verser Should Alex spot my peeps?
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Fri Sep 18, 2015 2:16 am
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Okay so I was thinking posting next- maybe after @Verser or something- so I might have Tes go out into the field of battle and 'accidently' *wink wink* shot someone.
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depends on the mood of Tessie of course >.> <.<
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Fri Sep 18, 2015 6:52 am
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Sounds good @PerksOfBeingAReader, Finch will be doing his best to get back to the kids and is starting to think he should try and sneak them out the peace corps camp and take them to that school he's heard about ;) Not sure the peace corps would like that so it's def. going to take time and maybe if something bad then happened at the school, the characters could end up on the road together? What do people think to that idea?

Alex can either go off with the kids/ risk coming by the peace corps camp with Finch since it sounds like he has an arrangement with them (a kind of you don't make me join and I'll help your guys out?) or carry on hanging out in his tree for now xD
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Fri Sep 18, 2015 6:58 pm
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If the kids want to come back to the school with Maggie, they could totally chill there for a little bit! And then I'm thinking the school gets hit with an attack cough cough, the Disciples!

After the attack, maybe the part of the USI crew that escaped tries to make their way back to the Peacekeepers.
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can I pursue deskro's group? @jumpingsheep I don't plan to notice you guys yet.
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Sat Sep 19, 2015 8:51 pm
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Deskro says...



@verser sure you can follow my guys. Looking forward to your entry.. I don't want this storybook to die, it's so fun.
  





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Sat Sep 19, 2015 9:14 pm
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I have my post up sometime soon c:
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Sun Sep 20, 2015 8:16 pm
jumpingsheep says...



Ok so @Rydia Maggie and Ethan are going to report back to their school/base after the fight. Would Finch's kids eventually be joining us at the school?
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