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Tue Aug 04, 2015 1:02 am
Alvarin says...



queerelves wrote:I'm in c: I think I want a prisoner, but I'm not sure where

Let us know when you decide where you want to be and what kiss you want ^^
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Wed Aug 05, 2015 9:14 pm
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This Storybook intrigues me greatly, I think its very original! I'm going to submit a character in a few minutes, and may I request the Healing kiss? Also, I'd like to have her in the desert, but if that fills up, then the prison center.
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Wed Aug 05, 2015 9:39 pm
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By the way, are the characters in prison uniforms? (In the picture for my character's appearance I left her clothes-less because I did not know the attire).

Well, she has been submitted!
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Wed Aug 05, 2015 10:51 pm
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Lain wrote:I'm going to submit a character in a few minutes, and may I request the Healing kiss?

Of course ^^ I'll make Aria reserve a spot for you.

Lain wrote:By the way, are the characters in prison uniforms?

Guards are in guard uniforms (without most of the weapons, or stun-guns rather than real guns), and the prisoners are in prison uniforms.

@TinyJarStoredDreams Just a note about your char (that I really like, btw). Her nails would be considered a weapon, and since she's a prisoner she'd either be forced to have them pulled out or she'd be forced to wear some kind of gloves that she can't take off so she can't hurt anyone. She can of course get them off somehow after the crash, but it wouldn't be easy.
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Wed Aug 05, 2015 10:57 pm
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Also, @Lain could you tell me where you want your character to have crashed?
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Wed Aug 05, 2015 11:00 pm
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Desert, but if that fills up then the prison center.
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Wed Aug 05, 2015 11:01 pm
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Alvarin wrote:
@TinyJarStoredDreams Just a note about your char (that I really like, btw). Her nails would be considered a weapon, and since she's a prisoner she'd either be forced to have them pulled out or she'd be forced to wear some kind of gloves that she can't take off so she can't hurt anyone. She can of course get them off somehow after the crash, but it wouldn't be easy.



Okay! I'll use gloves since I was planning on making her use them. Also thanks fo taking liking to her c:
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Wed Aug 05, 2015 11:05 pm
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Lain wrote:Desert, but if that fills up then the prison center.

Alright, desert it is, thank you ^^

Same question to you, @TinyJarStoredDreams Where did she crash?
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Thu Aug 06, 2015 12:37 am
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I'd like to join too!! Can I grab a spot as a prisoner in the desert?
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Thu Aug 06, 2015 12:56 am
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Alvarin wrote:Same question to you, @TinyJarStoredDreams Where did she crash?


City (I kinda want her and Elden to become friends or as close to it as possible)
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Thu Aug 06, 2015 11:24 am
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What would be altering your dna beyond the legal limit?
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Thu Aug 06, 2015 3:30 pm
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AlmondEyes wrote:I'd like to join too!! Can I grab a spot as a prisoner in the desert?
Of course ^^

Which means there's only one prisoner spot left, and that's in the desert. @queerelves if you still want a prisoner then that's where you're going xD

TinyJarStoredDreams wrote:I kinda want her and Elden to become friends or as close to it as possible
Sounds good c: IM me about it and we can plan.

Pundit wrote:What would be altering your dna beyond the legal limit?
I think anything that would be harmful to others (like, if you made your char breathe out poison with every breath), or something that would harm the potential children of your char would count as illegal. Edit from Aria: Also, it would probably be illegal to be less than 75% human.
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Thu Aug 06, 2015 3:35 pm
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@Alvarin That works xD

I should probably work on that profile, shouldn't I? >.>
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Thu Aug 06, 2015 3:50 pm
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queerelves wrote:I should probably work on that profile, shouldn't I? >.>
Yes, you should, so get on it xD
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Thu Aug 06, 2015 4:04 pm
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I should too >.> (life is being a stressful pain rn, I will get around to it though)
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