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Glory of the Raider [DT]



Would you play a reboot?

Yes - in the grunge fantasy setting as is current
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Yes - but add a meta-story, i.e. a multiplayer game
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No - the mechanics are weird
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No - just no, kek
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No votes
 
Total votes : 3


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Tue Aug 18, 2015 5:56 pm
Caesar says...



you have one post to do so :3
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Wed Aug 26, 2015 11:04 am
Sassafras says...



@Holofernes I seriously would like to write Ka'lahii's next post but because things must be done that I can not do with Kahli's POV, I am at a loss of where to start.

Even if it's not a full post, can we all at least establish what's happening there? I know everyone dies and she joins the group but... How? I don't want to assume control of anyone else's character.
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Wed Aug 26, 2015 2:53 pm
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so, a thing we could do is this:

Malek's team chases after Ka'lahii's. Meanwhile, the Aviti and her group get ambushed by another rival brigand band and a fight ensues. Malek's group intervenes. At the end of the fight Ka'lahii's group is dead, and Elyn decides to spare her life in exchange for the gem. Then maybe Malek says something like 'hey you fight well join our guild' and ta-da.

What do you think?
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Wed Aug 26, 2015 7:54 pm
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I can roll with those punches.
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Wed Aug 26, 2015 8:41 pm
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alright so how about you write that, then I take us to Jacqueline's
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Wed Aug 26, 2015 9:21 pm
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Behold Poncy!

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Since Poncy will be hatching this post, here's some visual clue as to what he looks like. He's about the size of a toddler and his hair solves the double purpose of being his wings as well because magic and I said so.

Poncy has the stature and size of your standard two year old. Does carry the malet as a weapon/wand. Does not fly, but serves mainly as ground reinforcement since Kahli covers the air well enough on her own. Wields Earth-based magic.
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Wed Aug 26, 2015 11:08 pm
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Question. Does summoning Poncy technically count as a spell? Or is it just something she can do? Because I may or may not have introduced Kahli's Fourth spell, Heartstrings, in that last post and I'm not sure if Poncy already took that Fourth Spell slot....
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Wed Aug 26, 2015 11:17 pm
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Lumi says...



Nah, Summon is a bonus ability for Arcanists.
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Wed Aug 26, 2015 11:19 pm
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YUS!!
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lol "YUS"

may I go next? I have to rush my way to the guild anyhow.
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Thu Aug 27, 2015 12:15 am
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by all means
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Thu Aug 27, 2015 12:21 am
Lumi says...



new at have poll it and girls boys.!

also y'all should feel free to control malek in your posts. in fact, i trust the writing ability of any of you to control any character and keep them up straight.
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Thu Aug 27, 2015 12:31 am
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...Can I vote me?
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Fri Aug 28, 2015 9:18 pm
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@15253 Great post darling, but I think we need you at the Guild by the end of it. It's time we moved things forward here.
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Sat Aug 29, 2015 4:02 pm
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gotcha! Sorry bout that :p
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