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Thu Oct 01, 2015 10:05 pm
TNCowgirl says...



She isn't in her dorm right now, but her belongings are.
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Fri Oct 02, 2015 2:19 am
jumpingsheep says...



Ok! What kind of belongings, anything I particular I should mention?
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Fri Oct 02, 2015 2:58 am
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Just a suitcase that she put under her bed. She threw her uniform in the trash though.
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Sun Oct 04, 2015 2:32 am
jumpingsheep says...



Posted! Let me know if I should change anything!
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Wed Oct 07, 2015 2:35 pm
Gravity says...



@TheForgottenKing

I found your post a little difficult to follow because you didn't indent properly (start and end paragraphs) with dialogue and you used the wrong 'your" several times and then there were just spelling mistakes... if you don't know these grammar and spelling rules would you please look them up and edit your post? I've noticed them with your last few posts and it can be difficult to follow a conversation in writing when it's laid out improperly.

I really am not trying to be rude so please don't take this personally!
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Thu Oct 08, 2015 10:29 pm
Tuesday says...



I submitted my character (I hope it isn't too late to join!)
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Sun Oct 11, 2015 6:24 am
CorruptedRoseJen says...



*gasp* BLAS-CHAN~~~! I will call you that from now on :3 Dun question the insane one~~~

Anyways, back from hiatus and boy am I glad to see this is resurrected! :D After reading all of your posts... I think my character is going to be the most normal... background-wise XD (hopefully not a bad thing...?)

I'll get her intro up soon. Also, I need a roommate... (* ^ *)
My room is an insane asylum, and I am the patient.

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Sun Oct 11, 2015 9:20 pm
CorruptedRoseJen says...



Actually, never mind. I think I'll sic an NPC into Lyra's room.
My room is an insane asylum, and I am the patient.

Beware of Dog signs are overrated. Beware of Writer.

Warning! Crappy author at work! Any hapless bystanders/passerbys will be sentenced to an eternity of hell by eye-hurt :3
  





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Tue Oct 20, 2015 3:02 am
Gravity says...



Wakey wakey
And the heart is hard to translate
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It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

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Tue Oct 20, 2015 3:13 am
Steggy says...



Would it be okay if I joined or is it too late?
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Tue Oct 20, 2015 11:17 am
kat13254 says...



@Stegosaurus No its not too late, go ahead.
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Tue Oct 20, 2015 3:37 pm
TNCowgirl says...



Waiting for Jumpingsheep to post.
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Fri Oct 23, 2015 7:57 pm
kat13254 says...



I feel so bad because everyone else is posting and my computer broke so I've only been able to watch from my phone! I'm so sorry! :?
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Mon Nov 02, 2015 4:24 am
CorruptedRoseJen says...



Anoo... I hope you guys don't mind if I drop Lyra in late for the party... I don't want to write her home --> school scene, so I'll put 'er in sometime after you've all gone a few rounds.
My room is an insane asylum, and I am the patient.

Beware of Dog signs are overrated. Beware of Writer.

Warning! Crappy author at work! Any hapless bystanders/passerbys will be sentenced to an eternity of hell by eye-hurt :3
  





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Mon Nov 02, 2015 3:16 pm
NicoleBri says...



Can I join or is it too late? :(
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