Young Writers Society

Yaaaaaaay~~~ \(O3O)/ Gerald-kun is awesoooooooooome~~~ SO MUCH INSANITY, YES? (/ OAO)/

Well, I like all of your characters so far. I think this will start turning interesting very quickly after the various story-lines converge~~~ :3

Also, @Verser-shi, I'm sorry for not noticing that there's a second page to the SB until now... *covers face* I'm a baaakaaa.... but, I find y'entry a bit hard to follow. Each character's spoken lines are included in another paragraph altogether, and another character's reactions is recorded immediately afterwards. This makes it a bit hard to keep track of who is saying wat, and who is not saying wat, yes? Y'might want t'put the dialogue in the same paragraph as th'speaker's action while speaking~~~

XD the hype is real!

Thanks Jen also ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -3-7 I salute you lord of tildes

I'm also aiming to post this weekend so prepare for some Kyra diva moments!

@Lumi, please kick me to do this and my Maze profile later...

Sorry for the long time no see...

wheres the foggy diva person .3.

Aw, poor Murphy. Now she has to be the brains and keep everyone from being killed? xD

Hey maybe we can meet up? I think I'll wait to post until after your group gets out then we can confront @TheClockworkConjurer later?

Sorry but there's a lot going on so I'm going to have to say I can't continue with this SB.

@kayfortnight Diva will be seriously upset if she gets killed so yes, Murphy has to keep them all alive xD

Meeting up sounds good to me @15253! It will be good for the detention kids to find out more about what's bee going on outside the centre and for everyone to try and figure out where they fit into this new world.

Sorry to hear that @Sardonyx but we understand! It's not always easy to keep up. If you want a summary though, the action inside the detention centre has mostly resolved itself so the kids there are breaking out and they're going to run into any and all groups of super people outside the detention centre. Then the main aim of the game is stay away from the authorities and the generally frightened public who would probably turn them in and try to figure out how to cope with being on the run and being sort of addicted to using their abilities.

Thanks for letting me I might try to read it one day when I remember and my son is sleep, best time to so everything then

Don't really know how to write my character into everything since shes not in the camp. I can arrange that but isn't everyone breaking out of camp? Should I just wait until everyone's on the outside to write?

Joining up with them outside of the camp probably works best. Maybe you can follow on from the post I wrote about Kyra dreaming and have Nalia able to sense where the people she has affected through their dreams are?

I believe you promised me a post Captain @Lumi