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Fri Jul 17, 2015 4:56 pm
Que says...



Soooo... for the kid, how much information should/can I repeat? I'm not exactly sure how to start off.
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Fri Jul 17, 2015 5:05 pm
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Okay. I have a little question.. If I were to post about the servant Arabelle, how would I start it? Like are we going in order of time periods or something?
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Fri Jul 17, 2015 5:22 pm
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@Falconer, it's up to you. You can recount a little of what happened already if you wish, but writing about them in the past is probably most important. So you can continue where Will's account left off (about to time-travel) or go back a little to explain Liz's feelings. Either way, by the end of the post (or by two posts, if you're interested in the challenge) Liz would have reached the Old West and will have encountered her first conflict.

@Tuesday, no, the order of time periods doesn't matter. Just use that code at the top of your post that has your character's name and time period, and all will be fine.
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Fri Jul 17, 2015 5:35 pm
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@Wolfie36 thank you so much. I will try to get working on that soon.
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Sat Jul 18, 2015 6:20 pm
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@SpiritedWolfe or @TheWanderingWizard, could you change the topic tags on this storybook to "closed" and "started," please? Thank you! :)
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Sat Jul 18, 2015 6:42 pm
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Done ~ I'm quite excited to start on our adventure! ^^

(For my post, I'll have my guard and wait a little to write for my kid, just because xD)
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Tue Jul 21, 2015 2:40 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



@Wolfie36, I have finally submitted the full profile for my second professor. My post will also be up in the next few days, and be out of both's PoV.
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And, TheMaieuticMesmerist


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Tue Jul 21, 2015 5:34 pm
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Great, @TheWanderingWizard! :)

For those of you who will be writing about Critech and the preparing for time-travel, remember that your character will have to go through a complete redressing in order to be appropriatley dressed for the past. They aren't allowed to bring any modern technology or clothing back in time, but the guard is permitted their weapons.
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Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Wed Jul 22, 2015 10:13 pm
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Ventomology says...



I finished writing the post for Qinghe! Um... apparently I wasn't actually a part of the SB, so I'll put up the post once I'm official.
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Thu Jul 23, 2015 12:45 am
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@Buggiedude2340 Sowwy guys!!! I didn't realize I had to do that. @SpiritedWolfe entered all your names for me. :)
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Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Thu Jul 23, 2015 1:15 am
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No problem!

(And the post should be up. Someone tell me if they have objections to anything I wrote.)
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on an island that I own, tanned and rested and alone
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Thu Jul 23, 2015 1:59 am
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@Buggiedude2340, flawless post! Great way to introduce the kid. :)
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Tue Jul 28, 2015 7:06 am
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Ello, everyone! Buggie, your post was amazing and it looks like the Han Dynasty section has a good start, but for the rest of you, here are some organized plot points you can try to cover in your post. Just to help you guys out a little.

If your character is a guard or historian, you can write about...
Receiving the letter
The plane ride to Arizona
Critech
-Meeting other characters
-Preparing for time travel
-Looking around the lab
Time traveling
The past

If your character is a parent... Aka @Rydia :P
Panic! My kid is gone!
Panic!
What shall we do? I'll go after my kid, just set up the coordinates!
What? I can't rescue him?
I think you get it.

If your character is from the past...
Follow Buggie's example
Your character's normal life
Conflicts
The arrival of the kid
Interaction with the kid (friendly or not)

If your character is the kid...
Time traveling
Ooooh... I'm in the past!
Interaction with characters of the past
Erm, probably some second thoughts about time traveling
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Tue Jul 28, 2015 6:26 pm
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Rydia says...



Haha that checklist is epic and yes, I need to post on this! *bookmarks*
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Wed Jul 29, 2015 4:54 pm
Wolfi says...



Aww, awesome posts @Megrim and Rydia!!! Megrim, I liked how your guard already works at Critech, I hadn't really thought about doing that. Has he been on any other time-traveling adventures before? That would be helpful, for sure. And Rydia, good characterization of Cecilia. :)
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  








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