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Thu May 14, 2015 12:12 am
Pretzelstick says...



This is how you do it @JKHatt-you go through to our storybook and read every single post carefully (and click the like button) and try to understand what's happening. Try to do this without any interruptions so that you can get sucked into the book. Then sit down in front of a blank screen and awaken your muse and start typing your post.

It's that simple and that hard. :D
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Thu May 14, 2015 12:17 am
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Exactly why I don't want to/feel like doing it, @pretzelsing
I have no idea what to write about or have Archibald do >.<
*wanders off to finish homework, then think about the post*
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Thu May 14, 2015 12:50 am
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@JKHatt

Maybe you can have Archibald meet Serena? I have her chasing a mercenary right now to avenge Mistral (her blood donor).

I haven't had any interaction with another character yet. I'm hoping that within the next few posts that she will bump into someone and then meet all of the CotN at the caves.

You can literally put Archie anywhere you want and have him stumble onto a couple of characters talking. It rarely happens where people will ignore someone trying to introduce their character.

If you need help, feel free to PM any of us for suggestions, I'm sure most if not all of us would be happy to help. :)
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Thu May 14, 2015 12:57 am
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@Theodorable

Well, I would do that but Rydia's already mentioned Archibald in her character's camp, so I have to have him move from there.
I really have no idea who's who or what's going on in this story... XD
*tries to catch up*
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Thu May 14, 2015 2:47 am
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@Tuesday, I think your post is great ^^ And it isn't too short at all.
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
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Thu May 14, 2015 3:16 am
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Also, I'll post soon ^^
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
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Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Thu May 14, 2015 5:09 am
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@Tuesday there's nothing wrong with your post at all! It gives us a nice sense of your character and tells us he's a man who is happy to put on the same sweaty clothes as yesterday and just get down to work. We need hard working, reliable characters like that in any storybook and really, don't worry about trying to be the best in Storybook, just look for a character who you feel your character could talk to and aim to keep them as in character as possible while having some fun.

If your character's at the camp and was only dreaming about being back at their shop then there should be plenty of opportunities for interacting with JKHatt's character and pretty soon I'm going to have some Sweepers or a group of bandits attack the camp so everyone has a chance to show how their character acts in a fight.
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Thu May 14, 2015 2:14 pm
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The plot thickens... :D
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Sat May 16, 2015 2:09 am
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Aria and Wandering, maybe one and/or both of you can meet up with me tomorrow (or today if you're reading this in the morning xD). Perhaps we can create some plan of action while discussing everything that's happened so far? (And thus my post can be finished with confidence.)
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Sun May 24, 2015 9:58 pm
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Sorry for the excessive lateness, but I've finally finished.

@TheWanderingWizard and @AriaAdams, for your reference, two others are left alive. Brent and Devian (but he is fairly wounded). I assume after Arealas 'recruits' Astrid (with the help of Wisp, more than likely) they'll head off to the Caverns as they realize they're after the same people. Oh, and Astrid will act a lot more vulnerable in their first interactions, because she'll want Arealas to have pity on her.
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Mon May 25, 2015 3:00 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



@Wolfare1, great post as usual.

@AriaAdams, do you want to go next, or should I? Then the other can write about the Caverns battle
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I've just arrived to the place where I'll be staying as a volunteer/youth worker for a year, so don't count on me being very active until at least next week, until I figure out the schedules and meet the people and the city and everything.
If you want to use Wisp in your post, remember that he would not say who/what he really is, and wouldn't act openly hostile. He'd maybe pale a bit and freeze for a second as he meets Rhaegan and the other Enlightened people, but then he'd just be kinda quiet and polite and not do too much.
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Mon May 25, 2015 8:00 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Okey dokey, VA! I shall start working on my post then.

btw, @AstralHunter's computer crashed this weekend, so any questions for him, please tag me in the comment as well. I convey the message(s) to him at school...
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Pretzelstick says...



@TheWanderingWizard and @AriaAdams are you still working in that post? Because I will work tomorrow on my post with the reaction of Mara. Just let me know who should post first and in which order.
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Sun Jun 21, 2015 3:11 pm
BrumalHunter says...



I regret having to do this, but I must drop out of this SB. I'm not contributing to this SB much, and that's not fair to all of you who do. You may do with Ion as you wish - he was never that important anyway.
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