@pretzelsing ... Teal wouldn't attack another person unless she was challenged ... and Imara didn't challenge her
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food? Of course I am. Why? Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
That's exactly what i was thinking @Rydia. I will work on that @Basil.
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once ~George R. Martin Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw
My post is updated with the scene of Ice biting Teal's leg @Basil (that's what you wanted). I would also like to say that Imara doesn't know that Ice bit Teal during the fight, so after the fight is done, when Rheagan (@Rydia) comes over, then it will all be clarified.
Oh yeah, and I added an outburst in Mara's and Rheagan's conversation early on . . . xD
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once ~George R. Martin Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw
It's tommorow (@Rydia) and I am wondering how Rheagan will react to the fight between Teal and Mara - this is getting hotter
@Wolfare1-one week ago you promised to write one.(I understand that you might be busy but still . . . I am wondering what your character will contribute here @Tuesday-you should just start writing and pop in the middle(just like I did . . .)-we're on page 2 and I really want to get to see Tyen in action.
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once ~George R. Martin Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw
Hmm perhaps make it longer? If you look at other posts on page 1, you can see how long and detailed some of them are. That's just my opinion though,of course.
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once ~George R. Martin Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw
Post length depends on individual style, inspiration and many other things; and there's nothing wrong with varied lengths - unless there's a specific rule saying, like, "All posts must be from 500 to 700 words and precisely seven paragraphs long", which does not exist in this case. Content is way more important than length, anyway.
Speaking of posts, I want to post for Wisp, but am not completely sure what should happen <.< People who are with him at the moment, can we discuss/collab on our next posts?
• previously ChildOfNowhere - they/them - literary fantasy with a fairytale flavour
Aria, I am up next with what happened in Wandering's post. (I am indeed working diligently on it, and after my AP test Friday, I will have all the time int the world to complete it.) And I'd be very happy for some discussion and collaboration.
this is why I have trouble with this SB, i fear that I am not writing as better as anyone else since everyone else has better thoughts and uses their imaginative better and of course I feel like that part of it doesn't exactly meet the standard of what or how I should write.. this is why this SB is so hard to get into to since I have a hard time following everything and I am sorry for not writing a detailed introduction as I would have hoped
Hey, Tue, don't think like that! We all have different styles and I'm willing to bet that each one of us looks at other posts (including yours, to be clear) and go "Man, I wish I could [insert idea/technique/whatever] like this person!" It's normal, and it's one of the things that makes SBing awesome, 'cause we ALL learn things and explore things with each SB and each character we write for.
• previously ChildOfNowhere - they/them - literary fantasy with a fairytale flavour
I was thinking the same thing, @Tuesday. I also have to catch up on just about every post, as I only read the first two (and skimmed over @Rydia's post that introduced Archibald. I was thinking of killing Archibald off or dropping out, but I really want to try staying in this SB. I'll do my best to scrape together an acceptable intro as soon as I can.
"I remember I posted Klingon and it made the mods super hard" -Willard
Prok once said something about Nate and apple pie. I forget the context.
- this is getting hotter 
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