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Mon Apr 27, 2015 7:58 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Nice post, granddaughter, yet might I point out that you sometimes omitted the space between the full stop of one sentence and the first word of the next sentence.

Just go look at that again, please. ;)
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Mon Apr 27, 2015 8:05 pm
Pretzelstick says...



Sure grandfather @TheWanderingWizard. Spacing has always been my weak spot, something that I can never get right. Lemme go back and edit that.
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Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:55 am
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I already know this week will be especially hectic for me, but I think that next week I can spare enough moments to get a post then, so I will daringly say that I will work on getting it up then.
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Mon May 04, 2015 5:57 pm
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Pretzelstick says...



Who's going next cause the last post that was done was 6 days ago! Let's get the pace going? Does anyone want to reserve next place(because if not then I will gladly take it)

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Psst @Wolfare1-it's next week
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Mon May 04, 2015 6:55 pm
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I still have a couple days >.> Considering Thursday I'm off school, I think that is when it will happen. (It's getting worked on, slightly, but steadily.)
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Wed May 06, 2015 6:46 pm
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Theodorable says...



I am currently working on a post, I just have to figure out a reason for Serena to have to search for the cavern. I was thinking a Sweeper invasion it I'm open to suggestions.
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Wed May 06, 2015 7:00 pm
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Rydia says...



A sweeper invasion sounds like a good idea - maybe she's chased in there or goes chasing after one of them?
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Wed May 06, 2015 7:30 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Sounds excellent! That could also cause Arealas and co. to move towards the Caverns quicker, and bump into Serena like that...

Just one quick question: Real Sweepers or mercenaries pretending to be Sweepers?
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Wed May 06, 2015 7:49 pm
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Which would cause more chaos, real or fake?
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Both!! The real Sweepers arrived in the town, and are trying to eradicate both the citizens and the fake "Sweepers", who were aat that moment hosting another raid on the town.

Then Serena might chase after a mercenary who tried to flee to the caverns.
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Thu May 07, 2015 12:17 pm
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I'm am so sorry I haven't posted!! I'm going to do so right now!!
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Thu May 07, 2015 12:21 pm
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Pretzelstick says...



I will do my post after @Wolfare1 has done hers.:)
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Thu May 07, 2015 2:43 pm
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Theodorable says...



I sort of went halfway with the Sweeper invasion. I left it open incase anyone wanted to use it for their post.
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Thu May 07, 2015 7:56 pm
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Hattable says...



Second page, people! We have made it to the second page!
Congratulations! Pat yourselves on the back! We did good. It was a great run!
See ya all later, I'm going out celebrating!

:p I really need to write my post >.<
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Sat May 09, 2015 7:32 pm
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Pretzelstick says...



Thanks @JKHatt! The 2nd page is a great achievement for our storybook-and our posts together.
On another note, I did my post and it might seem that Imara made an enemy ;).
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Pokes @Wolfare1 and @JKHatt into the action of writing the post
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