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@AriaAdams, I like the idea, but at the moment the character is too over-powered. When I said mostly human, I meant they have to at least be less powerful than the Enlightened humans and werewolves etc. You can keep the ability to sense who has angel blood but the wish fulfillment thing is too much. I'm happy for him to be able to sense what other's wishes are, but if he's to fulfill them, it has to be by ordinary means.

He can be quick to learn new things though, I'm happy for that to be a general skill he has.

Oh, yeah, I thought it might be too much. Actually meant to remove it, but figured to test the waters by leaving it anyway xD. I'll edit it in a bit.

And, done. Took out the lies part as well, it's more fun if he can't do that and is just really confused instead

Awesome - approved!

@AriaAdams, I love your post! I was actually thinking of making Felix the NPC beggar, and now your post was a sign that I should.

Also, to everybody else, I am reserving the spot for next post...

*exhales with relief* I was hoping I didn't mess up your idea of him. I also wasn't sure if he was the NPC you were talking about, but went with him as the only named other beggar so far, glad it worked xP

Posted! If there is any inconsistencies or unsurities, feel free to point them out!!

I have no idea how to put Tyen in..

Can someone fill me in on this sidestory with the thieves and whatnot, and clarify whom exactly they just found in the woods? (if it's explained somewhere in the DT already, just point me in that direction)

Also, how far from the town is Rhaegan's camp? How long would it take the group from town to reach it?

@AriaAdams, Arealas was on his way to find the Base of Operations of a group of mercenaries posing as Sweepers killing people in the towns. Naturally, Arealas, as the "ruler" of the poor people, he set out on this mission.
That is why he found Wisp. If you wish not to have been found, please inform me that I can edit my post.
Also, the bandits we encountered at the end of my post was @Wolfare1's character and some of her father's men.
She and I discussed this part in chat, and we decided that that specific part of the forest is under her father's control, and he sent @Wolfare1 to deal with the intruders. And seeing as both the Thieves and her party are after the same people, mistress Wolf and her men will join our party.

And to your other question: Rhaegan's party is about a half a day out from the town, which means that they're about half a day plus one hour from Arealas and Wisp.

Any queries, please feel free to ask them.

@JKHatt @Tuesday I'm planning to make a post on Tues/ Weds and I'm happy to include both your characters if that works for you? They can be part of the camp's following - perhaps they joined after their village was attacked by the Sweepers and while fleeing heard that Rhaegan was taking in anyone who would fight and offering food and shelter in return.

@Rydia, sounds great, thanks. I wasn't sure how I wanted to enter the story so I decided to just wait for someone to give me an opening.

@Rydia That sounds great.

Excellent post, @AriaAdams! I quite liked the refreshing perspective from which Wisp told his story.

@TheWanderingWizard, your post displayed the same calibre, but the content was more suited to your style, naturally.

@Auxiira and @Teddybear22, your posts were highly creative and amusing too. I can't wait to read more of your characters.

I have to totally catch up with all the unread posts of mine. I reserve the next spot/post to introduce Princess Imara to the scene of this SB.
*gets ink and quill*