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Sun Feb 22, 2015 6:30 am
AlmondEyes says...



Aw! I was hoping it would be sometime before February. I wanted Merrick and Thorne to be sweethearts, but never mind xD
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Mon Feb 23, 2015 9:35 pm
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Hey you guys, can someone have some interaction with April? Lol, as of now I am not sure what to post.
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Thu Feb 26, 2015 3:59 pm
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So I guess I will post today, but it will be later this afternoon, I don't know for sure.
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Fri Feb 27, 2015 9:50 pm
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Hey everyone! I'm here on behalf of the Storybook Newsletter for February's Captain's Challenge:

Your challenge this month, should you choose to accept, is to make at least five posts in a single storybook not owned by yourself by the end of February. This will win you five credits. The posts must be a mimimum of 250 words.


The deadline to get this is March 1st. I'm only posting here because some of you are really close and one of you already got it! Congrats @Gravity, you did the Captain's Challenge for February!

For reference, here are the points so far:

Spoiler! :
AlmondEyes - I
Gravity - IIIII
Shiney - III
NicoleBri - IIII
Sunshine - III
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Fri Feb 27, 2015 10:37 pm
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Not owned by yourself ? Not sure what that means, @Omni.
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*Ride like Lightening, crash like Thunder*


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Sat Feb 28, 2015 2:03 am
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It means a storybook you didn't create @AlmondEyes
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Sat Feb 28, 2015 2:52 am
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Of course that's what it mean, @Omni xD Just checking. Also, i'm working on post you guys!! @Nike
Last edited by AlmondEyes on Sat Feb 28, 2015 4:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Feb 28, 2015 3:58 am
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What exactly is a credit @Omni?
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Sat Feb 28, 2015 4:07 am
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From Storybook Badges topic:

If you want a badge, you need to be given a storybook challenge which you can then complete to earn a number of adventurer credits. These challenges will be issued by storybook owners or participants to revive or encourage movement in a storybook.
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Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:11 am
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@Omni I did another post. Please let me know if that qualified for my fifth one!:)
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Sat Feb 28, 2015 4:40 pm
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Yes it did!
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Sat Feb 28, 2015 11:29 pm
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I noticed this has been happening with me as well as others. SBs are not only about making things happen but improving as a writer as far as grammar, spelling, tenses and imagery. I think instead of grocery listing or going through "I did this" or "She did that" we could try to focus a little bit more on quality? For example, we've had some issues with setting as far as the day of the week and the weather etc. which are extremely important things. Plus we need more description like about how characters are feeling. Showing what's going on, not telling.

Idk I just don't like reading or writing posts that are laid out like grocery lists, you know?
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

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Sat Feb 28, 2015 11:31 pm
Ciblio says...



I'll try and post today, yo
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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Sun Mar 01, 2015 4:52 am
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I posted!! Hope you guys enjoy!!
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Mon Mar 02, 2015 9:48 pm
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For those who care, I edited Aprils post. :) I didn't like the one before, if anyone wants to, she is free to interact with.
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