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The Broken Seal [DT]



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Tue Oct 21, 2014 6:07 pm
Rosendorn says...



Didn't think chain was even a weapon option for astronomers.
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Tue Oct 21, 2014 6:17 pm
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I had to make sure I hadn't left it out. THIS IS HOW BAD I AM AT SPELLBOOK CONSISTENCY. Basically I changed them from a fist weapon to their own unique type of whip.

Iron Whip (One-hand)
1. Lightning Lash: An agile swing of your weapon for moderate damage. May stun an enemy.
2. Sonicboom: A blunt strike with your weapon, knocking an enemy away with a sonicboom.
3. Electrocute: Anchoring your weapon in the enemy, you transfer deadly amounts of electricity into their body. Ensures paralysis.
Iron Whip (Off-Hand)
4. Ether Lash: You draw energy from the air, imbuing your allies with refreshed energy.
5. Iron Hurricane: You drop to the ground, twisting your weapon around your body for massive Area damage. Strikes 20-40 times, or until the enemy leaves the area of effect.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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Tue Oct 21, 2014 6:25 pm
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Oh that's chains? This is how bad I am at identifying weapon types xD I thought that was, like, a thin strip of metal that could be coiled.
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Tue Oct 21, 2014 6:27 pm
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Chains, flails, cat-of-nine-tails, grappling hooks, 3D Maneuver Gear...
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Mon Nov 17, 2014 6:16 pm
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@SuperNintendo, @Judas, @Blackwood, @ReisePiecey, @Rosey%20Unicorn:

We've hit level 6, which means we all have unlocked Spell #3. I thought I'd put the level in the SB title, but I don't like the extra clunk. I'll just ping you guys whenever something substantial happens.

Since the last page has been mainly the Danny/Aten/Leigh show, it'd be nice to see Anka or Pilen in some action. Don't let that defer you, Bolt and Rosey, from continuing the story with me at your discretion.

The main amendment I wanted to make with this post is that, akin to Danny's childhood powers, unarmed elementalists can wield their element in minor ways like benders in the Avatar series.

Anyway, we start Chapter Three next, which takes place entirely in Norcaster (or close to Norcaster, traveling). Danny's mom, The Pirate Queen, is going to die, and Andrew will proposition the gang with a mission given to him by his mom, which is ultimately our part one plot.

Generally, Andrew will set out to recruit a team willing to help him travel the world and steal ancient gems from the four temples scattered across Europa (look at the map). These gems will ultimately Break The Seal On Something and Cause Something To Happen, but Danny and the gang believe, under the counsel of someone important, that doing so would cause chaos in the world, and as such they try to stop Andy before it's too late.

And later on they realize they were on the wrong side of the fight and take up Andy's work after he dies.

Anyway for now just know that Danny's mom is dying, Danny can't fight, Danny's dad is the mayor of Norcaster, and he may have a sister or something. THAT'S UP TO YOU.
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Mon Nov 17, 2014 6:26 pm
Lumi says...



@Holofernes, since you can't keep the same damn name for more than six months. loser
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Sat Dec 13, 2014 9:52 pm
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@Rosey%20Unicorn, @Omniclysm, @Holofernes, @ReisePiecey, @SuperNintendo

We've reached level 7, which means you get a bonus gold per post. That's the default perk, unless someone comes up with something better. At level 8, you get your second talent.

While I have your attention, my plans for the rest of this chapter are basically
1.) Scuffle with Andy and his crew
2.) Final meeting with Danny's mother
3.) Mother's funeral at sea

Throw in your sub-arcs at will. Danny's family lives on a retired war ship in the northern part of the Norcaster harbor.
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Mon Dec 15, 2014 4:46 am
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I'm currently editing the gear table to update a few things as well as add Hands to the armor types. Here are the patch notes.

TBS 2.0.5
♦ Hand Armor (Wraps, Grips, Gauntlets, Gloves) have been added as a main armor type, giving stats equivalent to a main armor slot.
♦ All armor now comes with a base stat of 40. These stats must be split between Power, Haste, and Defense. Main armor types are Chest, Legs, Feet, Hands, and Back.
♦ Resist is no longer a stat, and will be converted into Defense retroactively.
♦ New amulets and rings are available upon request. For this level set they will grant 15 stat points.
♦ Effective 15 December, weapons will have a minimum of 30 stats per hand, and a maximum of 40. The final base stat will depend on a dice roll.
♦ Effective 15 December, all characters will have a full set of statted armor and statted weapons.
♦ Prices on the Vendor Table have been adjusted to account for the new armor type.
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Wed Dec 24, 2014 11:46 pm
Sassafras says...



All caught up plot wise and ready to write! All hail Queen Pi.
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Thu Dec 25, 2014 11:27 am
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Also, updates on Pilen since there have been none.

I've chosen her talents as Broke A Leg and Dance Break.

Broke A Leg:

The ability to compel any crowd with feelings of love/adoration towards her. Makes an enemy physically and mentally incapable of causing her any harm. Duration - fight wise - depends on the person, with the shortest effects lasting three seconds.

Dance Break:

Increases Pilen's agility and speed while also heightening her senses for a short amount of time - 10 seconds est.
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Thu Dec 25, 2014 11:52 pm
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Reise, Simone will fight Pilen again for the title of queen. Flick me a message at some point and we can coordinate that.
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Wed Jan 21, 2015 11:34 pm
Omni says...



The DT has less messages than the actual SB xD
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Mon Mar 16, 2015 2:39 am
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--> Level 11 attained. Varied weapons and skills are unlocked. Check the guide for more info.
--> Profession Table has been converted to allow more slots. Everyone has been reset with seven free recipes to fill. More can be bought from the vendor.
--> All gold counts are up to date. If anyone wants to open a business as Simone did, please run it by me before setting up shop. We can discuss your paycheck at length.
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Sun Mar 22, 2015 5:05 pm
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TBS 2.0.6
♦ Level 12 attained. All level requirements have been adjusted to increments of 5 posts per level.
♦ Levels 21-40 have been added to the progression table.
♦ Masteries have been introduced.
♦ Improved Talents have been introduced.
♦ Guns available as weapons upon reaching level 31.
♦ Guilds introduced as high-level perks.
♦ Stephan has been added to all rosters.
♦ Fiona has been added to all rosters.
♦ Piety has been added as a stat to measure healing prowess.
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Sat Apr 11, 2015 4:27 am
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TBS 3.0
♦ Level 13 attained. Talent 3 unlocked.
♦ All Part 2 nameplates have been added to the Big Book of Spells
♦ Combo Log added to the Big Book of Spells
♦ Soundtrack in progress added
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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