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Mon Oct 27, 2014 11:20 am
Caesar says...



good good we are having progress. I've decided that we're going to finish things dramatically this episode, bring a lot of attention onto the Tower. I more or less have things figured out on my end, but as for the second factory, I was thinking you and Faye team up to make big building go boom, but feel free to think of anything suitably dramatic, guys.

Marble, maybe Pigeon ends up only operating from the shadows for now -- so she can recur in a later episode. Maybe make her into a more prominent villain?
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Tue Oct 28, 2014 7:56 am
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Holofernes wrote:Marble, maybe Pigeon ends up only operating from the shadows for now -- so she can recur in a later episode. Maybe make her into a more prominent villain?


Got it. She'll be a sort-of Moriarty figure.
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Wed Oct 29, 2014 8:35 pm
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with a pronounced taste for young women
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Mon Nov 03, 2014 11:45 am
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Yes so I think you should skip my turn at this point. Sorry for the inconvenience~
  





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Thu Nov 06, 2014 1:11 am
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Passing the baton to you, @Holofernes
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Thu Nov 06, 2014 3:06 pm
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horaaaaay the rotation continues
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Fri Nov 14, 2014 5:23 pm
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Are we still going?
Gahd, I should really check Skype more...
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Fri Nov 14, 2014 5:27 pm
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Yes still going. It's on Lou's turn so you can go bug him if you like

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Fri Nov 14, 2014 8:28 pm
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my post is halfway written! I am currently dealing with extremists forcibly occupying my school but once that resolves I'll get to finishing it.
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Wed Dec 03, 2014 8:39 pm
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Really sorry for the inconvenience, but I got a heckload going on in my life right now, and so I can't cover my post this turn. Biscuits, I know how you ended your post, so sorry about not being able to actually continue along that thread. Once this all smooths out I should be able to get back on track- hopefully this will be by my next post.

Sorry again.
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Wed Dec 03, 2014 8:48 pm
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That's okay, Marble. Would you mind if I did a post from Merc's perspective? I just don't want to lose another member of Alex's team... *glares at Avalon* ;)

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Wed Dec 03, 2014 9:15 pm
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No, sure, I know you'll portray him brilliantly. Thanks for covering for me as well.
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Wed Dec 03, 2014 9:18 pm
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No problem! I've basically now got control of that entire side :P hehehe

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Tue Dec 16, 2014 8:44 pm
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*fanfare*
Posted. Onto... Biscuits, I think?
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Only today and tomorrow remain for you to complete @Holofernes' challenge from the Challenge Master Thread!
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