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Thu Oct 16, 2014 10:47 am
Caesar says...



I realize the first half of this episode is shaping up to be not incredibly serious, but that might be stretching it
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Thu Oct 16, 2014 1:45 pm
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Hey, @Avalon, I forgot to ask - are you okay with the part I did from Centra's POV. Like, is there anything she did or said that you felt was OOC?

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Thu Oct 23, 2014 6:16 pm
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Is it too late to join this?
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Thu Oct 23, 2014 6:23 pm
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no it's not, technically we always accept, but you might have a lot to catch up on~
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Thu Oct 23, 2014 9:31 pm
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I TOTALLY REALISED IT WAS MY TURN
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Thu Oct 23, 2014 9:36 pm
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I was going to mention it on the DT but the last 5 or so messages in it were mine.

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Thu Oct 23, 2014 9:42 pm
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Alpha wrote:hmmmmmmmmmmm, maybe there could be one person in each factory, and a third one on the lookout for people who might be out for them? if the BC wants a regular supply of the brass s/he needs to make his devices, BC's better off convincing someone else (who works in the other factory) to also help BC out with brass-making/stealing (causing restlessness in both factories, which increases the fear of them twofold-- which should do nice things to their ego)


But maybe both teams is ignorant about (a) partner(s)? They're out thinking they're after just one person. What do you guys think?


I was thinking (careful there, me) that maybe the Brass Crown is more of a movement than one single person. My idea is that if you were, say, a brass worker who wanted a little more coin coming in, you would smuggle out small pieces of Brass and little mechanisms like gyroscopes and valves. You'd then take them to a member of the inner circle, who'd give you a little money, then send you on your way.

Could we use this? I know this might be a little lengthy.
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Thu Oct 23, 2014 9:49 pm
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that sounds good O: then again I'm half asleep so I think any idea would sound good to me >_> no, but it makes sense if it was a movement rather than just a single person. We just need to figure out how many, though, because this could complicate the story BUT WHO SAID THAT WAS A BAD THING 8D


(ALSO. YOUR SIGNATURE. NIGHTWISH. the third line is so brilliant <33333333)
  





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Alpha wrote:(ALSO. YOUR SIGNATURE. NIGHTWISH. the third line is so brilliant <33333333)


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Thu Oct 23, 2014 10:34 pm
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Fri Oct 24, 2014 8:24 am
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Wasn't sure what to call my post so for now it has the temporary title of 'So Many Bloody Stairs'. :P

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Fri Oct 24, 2014 9:14 am
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I was thinking (careful there, me) that maybe the Brass Crown is more of a movement than one single person. My idea is that if you were, say, a brass worker who wanted a little more coin coming in, you would smuggle out small pieces of Brass and little mechanisms like gyroscopes and valves. You'd then take them to a member of the inner circle, who'd give you a little money, then send you on your way.

Could we use this? I know this might be a little lengthy.


ye ye I dig. It's possible that all the townspeople in the Outskirts are part of this system and so it's fairly easy for our team to end up in big trouble
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Fri Oct 24, 2014 9:17 am
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Ok, I've started my post but I have to go the doctor's now. I'll try and work that in at some point.

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Fri Oct 24, 2014 9:19 am
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no problemo

edit: 'uninspiring waistcoats' is such a Merc thing to say, I love it
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Fri Oct 24, 2014 10:05 am
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Merc's a great character. The relationship between him and Alex makes me so happy. Also, my toe is not infected (yay!) which means I now have to go back to school. I'll do my best to finish the post by the end of tonight. :)

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