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Tue Sep 02, 2014 8:41 pm
NicoleBri says...



I will definitely post again after about 2 or 3 more people! :)
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Tue Sep 02, 2014 8:49 pm
NicoleBri says...



@Elinor Brynn I hope you don't mind what I added to my post! I think it makes Grace a little more interesting of a character. It is up to you what happens next!
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Tue Sep 02, 2014 9:21 pm
Elinor says...



I like it, but Carson's with Ahanu right now. It should definitely happen as Carson's making his way to the beach later on, though.

This goes out to everyone. Your posts are great so far, but if you aren't sure of something message the others that your posts affects - and then we'll be sure to all be on the same page :)

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Tue Sep 02, 2014 10:53 pm
NicoleBri says...



@Elinor yes definitely so. It can be whenever you decide to make it. That shouldn't affect Carson being with ahanu. It was just when she saw him so you could make it to where he is headed to the beach and she stops him.
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Tue Sep 02, 2014 11:10 pm
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Lumi says...



I think what Elinor's implying is that Carson went directly from his meeting with the other guys to Ahanu's bungalow--since that's what he said he was doing when he left the meeting.

Your post was basically out of the timeline.
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Tue Sep 02, 2014 11:43 pm
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NicoleBri says...



I don't have to change my post do I? :\
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Wed Sep 03, 2014 2:27 am
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Elinor says...



No! But in the future let's try to keep everything to the same timeline :)

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