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Tue Sep 02, 2014 8:18 am
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So, I'm ready to post next, just going through final edits with @shinethroughthedark coz there is a good bit of Dom interaction. Please guys, don't be shy to correct me if I write your character weirdly.

Also, I liked @DiagonalBluebird's post, especially since we get Father Peter calling Boone on his sexism. It made me think of my character more, in terms of why Boone would have recruited her. Perhaps we can say that Boone secretly recruited her for her cooking, but she proves she can be a lot more helpful. I'd like her to surprise herself and others in how much she grows and learns.

I think I want to give her a more solid skill that would be useful on team missions, and one that the others don't have - other than cooking lol. She has stealth (but I think Bella does as well), is an average fighter who will improve with training, but will avoid conflict if she can. I would like to add another skill that none of the others also have, perhaps one that she learns while being a Cath. My ideas include:

- Making clever camouflage gear for the Caths.
- climbing...? Combined with stealth she could access targeted buildings from above.

I'll come up with more ideas when I find out what skills the missions require.



Also, a reminder:

"To cook, clean and keep your bed warm?" Boone couldn't tell whether Father Peter was mocking him or slightly amused.

"Only the second one recently." Boone sighed, shoving his hands in his pockets.


He gets the benefit of the first one too, through Kinwe ;-)
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Tue Sep 02, 2014 12:53 pm
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Okay I love your posts, especially your ending Ether! xDD

And DBB great recruitment of Ray! xD It shows the respect Ray will get and it might just mess with Bella.

(Which is a good way for Bella and Ray to get off the wrong foot and such.)

Also I call dibs on the next post! Hopefully it'll be in very soon. : )

So excited!
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Sun Sep 07, 2014 2:22 pm
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Okay I posted my post (sorry it took so long) and I should mention that it is a little violent. Soooo excuse the violence and Bell seeming like a crazy woman. x)
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Sun Sep 07, 2014 4:29 pm
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IamTraunt says...



@Skydreamer, it was awesome <3 Perfect in fact :p
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Sun Sep 14, 2014 11:39 am
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SpiritedWolfe says...



If I can find time, I'll try to post either tonight of tomorrow.
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Sun Sep 14, 2014 4:44 pm
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I'm such a lazy bum. I'll get on the desktop sometime today and write a post. (°ロ°)☝
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Sun Sep 21, 2014 5:22 pm
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Sorry that took so long! My post has finally been finished. xD
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Sun Sep 21, 2014 7:35 pm
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Okay, I think it's about time I admitted I don't have the long-term commitment necessary to uphold contribution to this storyboard (or any storyboard). I don't know how the story's been flowing at the moment, but I thought I'd do you guys the courtesy of admitting that I'm a preoccupied person who ascribes herself to things she connot maintain in the long run. I therefore hereby officially put TENANT up as a common good, you may share him, discard him or fight over him as you wish. To be quite honest I'm quite proud of the fellow, so if he stays around a part of me would be thankful.

At the moment I'm writing some other stuff, I don't think I could stomach giving up this source of creative outlet otherwise. Good luck you people, you're loved and awesome. Keep this amazing story alive!

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Sun Sep 21, 2014 11:25 pm
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DiagonalBluebird says...



Hey ya'll. sorry I haven't been posting. first semester in college has kept me super busy. I'll have a post up something this week!
  





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Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:35 pm
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Awesome posts Diagonal and Shine! Glad to see this continually trudging along.
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megsug says...



*is excited about purist/spoiled fight*
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I can imagine that Izzy would be the start of the fight, meg. xD
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Sun Oct 05, 2014 5:21 am
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IamTraunt says...



I am so happy this SB hasn't died! ^^ great post, Dia and Shine :-)
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Sun Oct 05, 2014 5:42 am
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Ciblio says...



Thanks, @Wolfare1 & @IamTraunt!
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Sun Oct 05, 2014 12:37 pm
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Sonder says...



Fight fight fight! JJ is gonna love it/ hate it. Great posts, you guys.
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