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Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:05 am
winterbites says...



Feel free to ask questions c:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=100589&p=1205156&sid=bbc1f7d28195134d914ffa1b805b7916#p1205156
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Fri Jul 11, 2014 3:09 am
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Around when will this be starting do you think?
  





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Fri Jul 11, 2014 3:49 am
winterbites says...



I'm really not sure.
I'm going to be really busy with school starting.
But, we can start, and whoever wants to post first can c:
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Sat Jul 12, 2014 9:38 pm
Swiftfurthewarrior says...



Well, If no one minds, I'll do the first post. Oh, well, the second post. :)


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I think I'm gonna like it here! :)
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Tue Jul 15, 2014 12:55 pm
Liv says...



@SharraeWilson your characters confuse me a bit. I don't know whether anyone else feels the same or if I'm just having a blonde moment. Can you please explain what's going on a little bit?
  





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Tue Jul 15, 2014 4:21 pm
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@Liv well Eiva = Eivanna Hernandez is the twin who really wants to go this camp to get away from the "father" that doesn't pay attention to her and the "sister" who treats her really mean and tries to mess her life up. That's Andrea who's a daddy's girl and she saw the way her father was treating her "sister" so she decided to mess with her. Please she's jealous that Eiva got all the talent. Eiva can sing, play instruments, and act stuff like that. So they don't like each other. Andrea is going to this camp because her father wants her to continue messing with Eiva. He really hates her for a reason I haven't came up with yet. Eiva is trying to have fun and apart of her doesn't want Andrea to mess it up and the old part of her is used to ignoring her, doing everything she wants (which is why she carried her bags). The reason she dropped them because she figured it's summer why be her assistant, he won't know. and he is their "father."

Um I don't really know how much of this helped but overall Eiva is breaking out of her shell and she's going to stop having Andrea push her around. It's the summer what happens at camp stays at camp. But Andrea is trying to ruin that.
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Tue Jul 15, 2014 4:34 pm
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Oh and Andrea is your typical girly girl who'd cry if she broke a nail.
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Tue Jul 15, 2014 4:51 pm
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Ooookay, I'm just confused as to why Andrea would be so mean to her sister xD Lennon and Presley are sure to have a problem with that hahahaha
  





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Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:04 pm
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@Liv yeah that's what I was thinking
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Sat Jul 19, 2014 12:27 pm
LordGreenleaf says...



Hey guys so I was wondering if my post was ok even though Carter wasn't approved yet? I just wanted to get him involved.

Also, any ideas on love interests?
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Sat Jul 19, 2014 8:50 pm
Swiftfurthewarrior says...



It should be okay but you should pm winter to make sure. She might have a lot going on right now, with school and everything. Actually, that was a really good post, even if it was short.

Anyway, welcome to camp. :)
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Mon Jul 21, 2014 8:26 pm
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@LordGreenleaf I like your chapter and like how you handled Andrea. I would have done the same and made her look fake.
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Fri Jul 25, 2014 4:04 pm
Swiftfurthewarrior says...



Does anyone mind if I post one in response to LordGreenleaf's?
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Mon Jul 28, 2014 5:21 pm
ChimeraMania says...



Not at all
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Tue Aug 05, 2014 3:42 am
Swiftfurthewarrior says...



I'll try and get it done on Wednesday.
It's just, a lot of stuff has happened and I haven't been on YWS for several weeks.
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