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Fri Jul 31, 2020 5:33 am
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still good
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Fri Jul 31, 2020 8:06 am
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Okay I've been doing some upkeep to the Tome. @Chaser your uncommon cloak is hilarious.
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Fri Jul 31, 2020 8:57 am
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Level Up!



We are now at level Nine!

So, here are the rewards:

  • 140 Gildar
  • 1 Prophecy Power
  • 1 Talent
  • 1 Hextech Slot
  • 1 Weapon/Off-Hand & 2 Armor Piece Upgrades
      This is to allow you to upgrade one of your weapons and armor from Common to Uncommon. This makes them a bit stronger and provides you with some kind of added benefit. These will get more beneficial the better upgrades we get.

Here's what everyone has to add in the Tome:

  • @ScarlettFire
    • 2 Prophecy Powers
    • 1 Talent
    • 1 Hextech Slot
    • 1 Uncommon Weapon/Offhand Upgrade
    • 2 Uncommon Armor Upgrades
  • @AlyTheBookworm
    • 2 Prophecy Powers
    • 2 Talents
    • 2 Hextech Slots
    • 2 Uncommon Weapon/Offhand Upgrades
    • 3 Uncommon Armor Upgrades
  • @Chaser
    • 1 Prophecy Power
    • 2 Talents
    • 1 Hextech Slot
    • 2 Uncommon Weapon/Offhand upgrades
    • 2 Uncommon Armor Upgrades
  • @soundofmind
    • 2 Prophecy Powers
    • 1 Profession & 3 Talents
    • 2 Hextech Slots
    • 1 Common Weapon and Armor Set
      • 2 Uncommon Weapon/Offhand upgrades
      • 3 Uncommon Armor Upgrades

Sound, that sounds like a lot (it kinda is) but I'd like to help you with it so you don't feel overwhelmed. @AlyTheBookworm before you post your post, lemme know and add it to that wfp that I shared with you forever ago so I can just doublecheck and stuff! Also, I will add a challenge tomorrow so wait to post until the challenge is up so you get those juicy points
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Fri Jul 31, 2020 1:08 pm
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*nervous laughter* is this a lot? aha... maYBE .... If/when you have time could you like, uh, walk me through it

and then maybe after aly or you posts i can hop in w/Belxibis!
  





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Sun Aug 02, 2020 12:15 pm
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I HAVE FINALLY CAUGHT UP ON READING ALL OF THE POSTS AND wow... I love all the characters. Paimon is HILARIOUS, chaser, and Tyri and Railyn are babies? Love them. Eli is soft sadboy vibes and I love it.

The vibes are immaculate

ALSO, CHASER (and OMNOM?? IDK YOUR PLANS) your post was so good and I loved it but I do know Omnom said we're gonna try to retcon Haster out and put Belxibis and I don't know how much of that will undo what u have :( I'm sure we can work it out so it's not a lot!!! I just figure Paimon's reaction to a big blue tiefling man might be a bit diff from clumsy 'ol Haster.

WE CAN FIGURE IT OUT I'M SURE!!
  





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Mon Aug 03, 2020 1:03 am
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Yeah I forgot how much Haster was in Paimon's last post so we'll have to figure something out. Also @Chaser I forgot to mention but I went ahead and deducted Paimon 50 Gildar for an escort out of the city
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Tue Aug 04, 2020 3:08 am
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Aww thanks @soundofmind <3

so, fun fact, that post was only like eight words shorter than Chaser's last post lol

@AlyTheBookworm so i went ahead and posted before your post. Hopefully it doesn't affect your post too much, but I now have a way for our characters to easily get out of Yse and meet each other :D we can finally get this show on the road
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Wed Aug 05, 2020 11:10 am
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OKAY SO FINALYL DID MY TOME STUFF FOR ELI.

Ahem, as outlined below~

Prophecy Powers;
- Healing Shield: A magical shield that Eli throws up using a magic stored in the gem embeded in the broach he wears, intended to be used as a battlefield medic's tent. He only uses it as a last resort or if alone, as an emergency kind of deal because it takes a lot of focus to maintain, especially if he's also attempting to heal someone.
- Spare The Dying: Not exactly healing magic, but an extension of it, this ability allows Elidyr to stablise someone if they're dying or very close to it. Depending on how badly injured they are, it might only buy time for last words/last rights, or maybe to preform surgery or call for a more experienced healer--one who won't hurt them as they're trying to heal them.

Talent;
- Quick diagnosis: Eli can accurately tell what's wrong with somebody with a quick inspection without the aid of magic, as he has knowledge of many diseases and ailments thanks to his training with the Asturian Military.

Hextech;
- Feather Gem: One out of a pair of gemstones attached to a cord intended to threaded onto a bag or pouch that cause said pouch or bag to became lighter. Can be attached to almost anything for the same effect to varying degrees.

Weapons;
- Dagger: Elidyr’s simple dagger, mainly used for hunting and trapping, in his non-magical healing and occasionally for self-defence. A pretty little thing with white leather wrapping the hilt. Has now been enchanted to stay sharp.

Armor;
- Enchanted Cloak: The cloak has shifted colors in the middle of the night, and has small resistance to magic. Can now also act as camoflauge, hiding Eli (and at least one other) by conforming to his surroundings when he covers himself in it completely.

- Gloves of Warmth: A pair of simple, innocent-looking gloves that are lightly enchanted to keep the wearer's hands warm during cold weather.

Also, to note: "Sara" stole about 10 gildars from him!
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Wed Aug 05, 2020 5:40 pm
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@soundofmind that was a nice, cute post from you! I actually really like how it introduces Belxibis as a new character (even though we're retconning him in at the same time). He seems like a nice new addition to the group dynamic. Can't wait for him to actually interact with the group he's now a part of XD
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Wed Aug 05, 2020 6:02 pm
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@ScarlettFire you gave me everything I needed in the tome- almost XD your cloak is already uncommonly enchanted, so you gotta find something else to upgrade to uncommon.

Also, fair warning but we're probably going to level up to Level Ten with sound's post XD

@AlyTheBookworm how goes it? Anything I can do to help?
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Wed Aug 05, 2020 7:58 pm
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I'm so sorry, still working on it! I've finished 1226 words and I'm about done.

I was going to end my post with Railyn and Tyri meeting, so do you think we could work out how they'll meet and interact on the wfp? I'm leaving for work now so I won't be able to write anymore today, but I'll be around until whatever time I posted this reply (4 pm for me) tomorrow.
  





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@AlyTheBookworm Sure thing! And no worries :D don't be sorry!!

Do you still have the wfp that I linked you? If so, go ahead and c/p what you have so far and we can definitely work a bit tomorrow! I have a bit of a drive tomorrow so I might have to leave early. If we can't finish the ending tomorrow, what do you think about Friday?
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Thu Aug 06, 2020 4:35 am
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Thanks! I copy-pasted what I have so far into the wfp. I also have Friday off, so I'll be free the entire day if we can't finish the post tomorrow.
  





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Thu Aug 06, 2020 11:44 pm
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Paimon's post has been edited to introduce Belxibis! I now demand holy compensation
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