Young Writers Society

YWS says my file is too chonky for my notebook picture so i copy pasted and didn’t bother to format C:

"gum wrapper hearts" has me swooning, both the concept of it and your poem - it's just so SWEET! your entire thread just makes my heart burst in all the good ways :") Can't wait for more of your poetry <333

first off, even the title is amazing and has such emotion, and it just keeps on getting better!!
I actually quite like the idea of writing it down in your own handwriting, makes it look so beautiful instead of the straight aligned letters that one gets with typing. I especially love your day four poem! There's something so poetic about the gum wrapper that I had never thought of. I can't wait to see more! (Also might I suggest an image resizer like Tiny.png or something? Could help when your file size is too big and you don't want to mess with the quality!)

holy heck "an infinite second / is all we need" speaks to me on such a deep level - it captures that feeling of being so happy and just wanting to stay in a moment forever, and never wanting it to become a memory, and feeling kind of anxious about the fact that you can't hold onto it forever. Such a good line <3

I also think the handwritten style is a really cute idea; it makes the thread feel personal and artsy. Keep up the great poeting!

@Quillfeather, the handwriting thing wasn’t completely intentional but i’m glad you enjoy it haha! (i simply dont have time to type them out and format, so i just write them in my journal and take the quick shots. they’re in their raw first form too, so i think my scribbles and stuff bring it together. thank you thank you!

@Seirre thank you so much! I was actually stumped yesterday when i wrote that so I’m really glad that my word barf made sense 😂 Thanks so much!

bruh I was gonna do something with callused hands. Oh well, time to make something original out of something not.

All joking aside, love this one so much. Special person with a special poem with special imagery. It's so nice.