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not all of us are perennials



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Sat Mar 18, 2023 6:24 pm
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Lovestrike says...



not all of us are perennials

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Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
[Solstice, she/her]
  





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Tue Apr 04, 2023 3:47 am
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alliyah says...



Hey! Good luck @Lovestrike! <3 Excited for your poetry this month! :) You've got a beautiful title there!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Wed Apr 05, 2023 9:38 pm
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1/15: the perfectionist meets earth for the first time

it forces me to pause
heart open
finding no fault
only struggling to hold
such beauty

overwhelming
in its scope
how can the world
be so ferociously
lovely?
Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
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Fri Apr 07, 2023 5:08 pm
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2/15: for you, i will don my straw sunhat

you never used to
like the idea of gardening
you thought it was something
for women in straw sunhats
with age-softened hands
tending sprouts

too much to nurture
to remember to water daily --
you were never maternal
enough to grow something
you believed

when you bought the first seedlings
you were as terrified as you were
any time a new mother asked
if you wanted to hold
the baby.
Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
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Mon Apr 10, 2023 6:14 pm
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3/15: to be rooted, to be like a tree

the sequoia could
have been the center
of the cosmos

thick trunk holding
hell and heaven
and our middle earth
together like
a stacking abacus

a turning of the world
and what was buried
sent to the sky.
Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
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Tue Apr 11, 2023 5:21 am
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alliyah says...



Ah! Love the layered image in this latest poem! Very thought-provoking. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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4/15: cast away, somewhere in the stars

the nights are so long now
she feels old before
she has reason to be

still she loves
the way orion rises
from his summer bed
and cassiopeia
migrates heavenward
like a star-winged bird

she loves how the winter
takes the ocean waves
and hammers them out
along the beach

the sky and water
steel grey upon grey.
Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
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Wed Apr 12, 2023 7:39 pm
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5/15: on bereavement

trees learn death early
every autumn

leaves dropping away
with such grace
that the final change where
roots go cold feels to them
no great burden.
Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
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Thu Apr 13, 2023 2:41 am
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Meshugenah says...



Lovestrike wrote:trees learn death early


!!!

That! That is an entire theme within your theme, right there.
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Thu Apr 13, 2023 5:57 am
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phantasm says...



Spoiler! :
Was going to quote the exact section Meshugenah commented on!! <3 Loving each of your poems, but something about #5 is particularly beautiful and haunting. The language in your poetry is just simply breathtaking; you manage to say so much so concisely, which is really an impressive skill. Absolutely love all the nature-themed poetry and can't wait to see more !!
she/her
  





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6/15: i wish to be in bloom
there is something
about cherry blossoms

ethereal and full
and floating and so fragile
you know even as you breathe
in their beauty

the first rain will
strip them from skyward
until the trees are empty

the ground
matted with the flesh
of petal upon petal will soon
sink into the earth.
Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
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7/15: i wonder if the sun yearns for the morning

i would lose all
other sensations before
the warmth of the sun
on cool skin

solar fusion
like a lover's touch
gentle on your shoulder
as it always will be.
Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
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Sat Apr 15, 2023 12:23 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Spoiler! :
Ooh. I really like the juxtaposition of the warm sun on cool skin in the first stanza. And then the description of the gentleness of the sun in the second.
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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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8/15: spending an afternoon in the city

we are that of
saplings and seedlings
and the plants that writhe
out of the sidewalk

sometimes
i wonder if the heart
can only be in so many
places at once

a promise swelling
tell me again and again
how the grass grew back
still green.
Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
[Solstice, she/her]
  





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9/15: on droughts and other metaphors

it runs a canyon
down my heart

welling life
within my ribcage
waves spilling
over reservoir edges
across long plains
of freckled skin

the feel of
things growing joyful
in the desert outside
a cosmic coming.
Didn’t Sappho say her guts clutched up like this?
[Solstice, she/her]
  








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