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on computers and chemistry



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Sat Mar 18, 2023 5:47 pm
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Spearmint says...



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lessons learned from last time {
  • focus on quality, mint! if you rush, you'll end up with low-effort, junk food poems you won't be happy to discover later
  • but also... don't listen to those doubts that tell you you're not a good enough poet. because even if a poem seems ridiculous/shallow/not "qualified" in any way, as long as you put in effort, you'll be glad to discover it later :]
  • just have fun with it! ^^
}

goals {
  • (1 poem/day) * (30 days) = 30 poems
  • (2 comments / 3 days) * (30 days) = 20 comments
  • 5 poetry jams (yes, i'm going for those badges xD)
  • shout out >= 3 poems using #ThePeoplesPick
}

table of contents {
  1. Buffering...
  2. Malware, Malware, Everywhere
  3. Atoms
  4. Computers
  5. Ramblings
  6. Loops & Blessings
  7. Burnout
  8. Languages
  9. Binary Search
  10. Homework
  11. My computer is my best friend
  12. The Traveling Salesman Problem
  13. chemistryyy
  14. Unfortunately, I can’t stop time
  15. City lights from an aeroplane
  16. good things traffic light colors come in threes
  17. Codes
  18. personal computers depreciate by 50% each year
  19. Potassium
  20. Ramblings on emoticons
  21. judging devices by their covers
  22. coming home
  23. fun fact
  24. procrastination
  25. hm
  26. old books
  27. limits
  28. (untitled)
  29. late night ramblings pt. 3?
  30. charge
}

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Sun Apr 02, 2023 2:29 am
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4/1

Buffering…

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buffer overflow—
too much data—
overloaded, overridden, overwhelmed, i cannot—
<segmentation fault. you do not have permission to access this memory location>
try turning it off and on again

as i was saying.
buffers are solutions that can resist dramatic changes in pH
upon the addition of acid or base.
but what happens when a buffer exceeds its capacity?

we always needed a buffer between us, you and i.
a screen protector, shielding a phone from the elements and oily fingers.
or mineral oil, preventing pure potassium from reacting with air.
yes, a buffer.

i should’ve had a buffer
of responses i could give you
but i ran out, and you walked away.


perhaps it’s for the best.
after all, the answer is:
the buffer cannot resist pH changes any longer;
it rapidly becomes acidic or basic.

and you must know…
sometimes a restart is not enough.
mint, she/her


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Sun Apr 02, 2023 10:46 am
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Liminality says...



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Really interesting first poem, mint! I thought you brought together all the different meanings of 'buffer' in a unique way. I liked the transition between the second and third stanzas, as well as the echo of the acidic/ basic image in the fifth stanza.

Happy NaPo!
she/her

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Happy NaPo, @Liminality!! And yeah, I found all the different meanings of “buffer” fascinating xD Thanks for the sweet comment! ◊◊◊
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Sun Apr 02, 2023 6:25 pm
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4/2

Malware, Malware, Everywhere
(sung to the tune of Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star)

Malware, malware, everywhere
How you give us such a scare
Rootkits, Trojans, ransomware
Keyloggers, worms, and spyware
Malware, malware, everywhere
How you give us such a scare
Viruses, worms, and bots
Hybrids, adware, logic bombs
We must update frequently
Antivirus software is the key
Malware, malware, everywhere
How you give us such a scare

original lyrics:
Spoiler! :
Twinkle, twinkle, little star
How I wonder what you are
Up above the world so high
Like a diamond in the sky
Twinkle, twinkle little star
How I wonder what you are
When the blazing sun is gone
When he nothing shines upon
Then you show your little light
Twinkle, twinkle, all the night
Twinkle, twinkle, little star
How I wonder what you are
mint, she/her


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Sun Apr 02, 2023 7:53 pm
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Spoiler! :
omg can we get someone to sing this? it's so fun!
"I've got dreams like you--no really!--just much less, touchy-feeley.
They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
on an island that I own, tanned and rested and alone
surrounded by enormous piles of money." -Flynn Rider, Tangled
  





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Sun Apr 02, 2023 8:57 pm
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momonster says...



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gmo computer poetry!!! both of these poems are so intriguing and well-written. and i didn't actually know about two of those lines in twinkle twinkle little star, so thank you for teaching me something lol. awesome job mint! good luck for the rest of your napo <3
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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ahh thank you, @Ventomology and @momonster!!
Vento - if I sing it later, I'll edit in a link to a recording, haha XDD
momo - yess, computer poetry! thank you c: <3
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Tue Apr 04, 2023 3:59 am
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alliyah says...



SPEARMINT! THIS THREAD IS SO VERY YOU! Some of these would be such a fun pairing with your novel too - I love how thoughtfully you've made these computery-themes poetic, it's a little mind-bending and unexpected in a way that makes me smile. Looking forward to continuing to read and learn! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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XD Thanks so much, @lliyah!! ^-^

Edit: whoops, that's right-- you're back to @alliyah! =0
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4/3

Atoms

Why can't you trust atoms?
Because they make up everything!


I could make up the story of us.
Call you the nucleus, the protons and neutrons,
and I the electrons.
(Not orbiting, mind you. Electrons are not planets;
their positions can only be described in probabilities.)

But love poems have been written--and rewritten--
to the point of triteness, don't you think?

I could make a new name for myself.
Add one to my atomic number, become a new element.
But in the end,
atomic symbols are not enough
to spell out all I have been and want to be.

If an atom tells you it left its electrons somewhere,
ask it,
"Are you positive?"
And it'll respond,
"Yeah. I'll have to keep an ion them next time."


I suppose at least
making chemistry jokes is
something I can do.
mint, she/her


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Tue Apr 04, 2023 4:49 am
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Spoiler! :
Ugh thank god for humor! I'm so glad we're seeing lots of poems with jokes this year--yours are always so well-incorporated into the theme and structure too!
"I've got dreams like you--no really!--just much less, touchy-feeley.
They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
on an island that I own, tanned and rested and alone
surrounded by enormous piles of money." -Flynn Rider, Tangled
  





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Tue Apr 04, 2023 5:15 am
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Spoiler! :
Yess humor is the best! xD And aww, thanks-- it makes me really happy to hear that! <3
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WeepingWisteria says...



Spoiler! :
Omg your stanza:
I could make a new name for myself.
Add one to my atomic number, become a new element.
But in the end,
atomic symbols are not enough
to spell out all I have been and want to be.

That vibrated in my soul. I love that so much.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Spoiler! :
Ahh! :33 Thank you for the sweet comment, Wist! ^-^ <3
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