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Sun Apr 19, 2020 5:18 pm
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Awru says...



Lets do this NaPo thing. Only last month I didn't have the faintest idea that Poetry is the most beautiful way to express emotions. Its dreamy, its nostalgic, its thoughtful, its just simply beautiful. I am actually grateful to my exams who introduced me to poetry(EsCaPades). I am an amateur willing to learnThats a bold assumption Awru
Also I thought it will be fun to have a themenot like I have the audacity to follow it asdfghjkl. So I decided on Rain. Why you ask cuz I like rain. Its fun and pretty and dreamy. The theme has to be*coughcough* flexible so I think I will also add other aspects of weather like sun, wind thats all I can think of right now ecetra
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After
All this time
The Sun never says
To the Earth
"You owe me"
Look
What happens
With a Love like that
It lights the
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Sun Apr 19, 2020 5:29 pm
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Liberty says...



Good luck, @Awru! Your theme sounds super cool and I'm excited to see what you come up with. :)
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that LadyBug's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  





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Mon Apr 20, 2020 3:34 pm
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Awru says...



Spoiler! :
Thanks @Liberty <33
This is going to my first NaPo poem Whooppp! I decided to get fancyy. The attachment is blur. So click on it if anyone wants to read it.

NaPo Poem: 1

"Drowning In the Rain"
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Last edited by Awru on Tue Apr 21, 2020 11:38 am, edited 1 time in total.
Even
After
All this time
The Sun never says
To the Earth
"You owe me"
Look
What happens
With a Love like that
It lights the
Whole
Sky
  





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Tue Apr 21, 2020 11:37 am
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Awru says...



Spoiler! :
Made my second NaPo poem. Whoop! I was feeling one of those feelings ya know

NaPo Poem:2

"Its Raining Again"
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Even
After
All this time
The Sun never says
To the Earth
"You owe me"
Look
What happens
With a Love like that
It lights the
Whole
Sky
  





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Tue Apr 21, 2020 5:43 pm
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Liberty says...



Spoiler! :
Ooh, I love your poems are fantastic! I especially like the first one. You use very interesting words that knit together very well. And the little pictures in the corner add a nice touch to your poems. Keep it up! I'll be keeping up with your thread. :)
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that LadyBug's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  





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Wed Apr 22, 2020 1:45 pm
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Awru says...



Spoiler! :
Aww! Thanks @Liberty
So I ended up writing the 2nd part of the above poem. It just had this incomplete feeling to it. I felt like I just haavvee to give the whole story! Also I was feeling kinda romantic and sadistic. I hate myself

NaPo Poem: 3

"Its Raining Again" 2
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Even
After
All this time
The Sun never says
To the Earth
"You owe me"
Look
What happens
With a Love like that
It lights the
Whole
Sky
  





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Thu Apr 23, 2020 3:50 pm
Awru says...



Spoiler! :
Well! It isn't exactly very poemy but thats all I could come up with



NaPo Poem: 4

"Unspoken"
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Even
After
All this time
The Sun never says
To the Earth
"You owe me"
Look
What happens
With a Love like that
It lights the
Whole
Sky
  





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Sun Apr 26, 2020 9:16 pm
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alliyah says...



Awru, that last poem has really fascinating formatting, from the punctuation to the alignment - I like seeing the more experimental side to your poetry! (Your author note about the last one not being very "poemy" made me laugh -> that's exactly the type of poem I like to read!!) Also I really dig the visuals you're choosing to compliment your poems. Well done!
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  








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