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a time for peace



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Tue Apr 14, 2020 1:01 am
ellasnotebook says...



#10 I'm not really sure this one makes sense oop

You are so pure and lovely dear-
eyes clear as the sky after rain,
dimples wide enough for me to drink it's tears.
  





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alliyah says...



Really liked that last chunk of poem 9 with the bird/noah allusion and also poem 7 !!! wow! that was a really vivid poem, the image of stapling your skin to places so people know you're there -> is just so gory, but also really makes an impression with that metaphor - you're really good at closing poems up too, which is not always easy.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun Apr 19, 2020 4:35 am
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ellasnotebook says...



@alliyah

Thank you! I appreciate it!
  





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Wed Apr 29, 2020 9:17 pm
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Lib says...



Wow, your poems are amazing, ella! I'm loving the imagery you've woven into each of your poems. #7 is especially deep. I could almost hear my heart clench when I started reading. #10 is really cute, by the way! It has beautiful description. I'm hoping to see more from you even though it's the second last day of NaPo, heh.
*insert quirky signature here*
  








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