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Song Of The Rising Star



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Wed Apr 15, 2020 2:24 am
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EverLight says...



Lamentations IV
The World To Me
Don't change it
You can't escape it
Don't hide form it
You'll never outrun it
Focus on what matters
Let go of your heart
Let go of your dreams
You know this is the way
I'm winning at life!
  





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Wed Apr 15, 2020 2:26 am
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EverLight says...



Loved Ones To Me
Everything we've done, we've done out of love
Your more beautiful then your eyes can tell, and we'd die for you
We admit We've made mistakes, but through them all
We've always cared for you.
We'll never forget you.
We just ask that you forgive us
I'm winning at life!
  





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Wed Apr 15, 2020 2:34 am
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EverLight says...



Chocking Blackness. Everything is distorted. A particle falls through the shadowy depths of the Blackhole, feeling chains stretch around it longer, and longer, as it does so. Heavy pressure. Everything is confined. The particle has become part of the Blackholes prison. It lays, there lifeless, stripped of everything, but existence. Movement. Everything is motion. Thousands of more particles huddle together. Together they are stronger. Heat. Everything is alive. The Blackhole can not trap anymore of it’s prey. The particles crash into each other excited. Freedom is at hand. An explosion. Everything is speed. The particles shoot out of the Blackhole, faster than light. Starlight. Everything is still. The particles enter space. They have arisen. They are dead no more. They have found liberty. They have become Dark Matter.
I'm winning at life!
  





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Wed Apr 15, 2020 3:34 am
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EverLight says...



you seem to think i'd shatter and break
and wilt like that dead plant you once threw out.
but that was yesterday and it's funny really
because thanks to a broken heart
I can spread my wings
and know the stars once more
I'm winning at life!
  





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Sat Apr 18, 2020 12:44 am
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EverLight says...



The day of our love fades into night
I hear my heart sing in the quiet
Be still and embrace these shadows
Tell the stars a victory has been won
For they are they alone understand the scars
Let the darkness seep into your soul
Be reformed by the twilight and rejoice
Sing in triumpth to the moon
Dance a dance only the solo know
For the tears, the wounds the despair
Are the despair, the wounds, the tears,
Of victory.
I'm winning at life!
  





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Sun Apr 19, 2020 3:56 pm
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Awru says...



All your poems are so intense and beautiful. They have such strong emotions and you have done a welldone job. I really love hove you have used stars, moons and stardust. Its just beautiful
Even
After
All this time
The Sun never says
To the Earth
"You owe me"
Look
What happens
With a Love like that
It lights the
Whole
Sky
  





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Sun Apr 26, 2020 9:08 pm
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alliyah says...



I love the intensity of your poetry too Everlight, especially some of your shorter pieces, a personal favorite has to be the one from April 14th - the bitter but carefree attitude is well expressed. Great work this month, it's been fun reading!
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  








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