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Fri Apr 24, 2020 9:38 am
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25. a throne built of justice and mercy

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Sat Apr 25, 2020 1:46 am
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In this latest batch I think 21, 22, and 24 are some of my favorites. (I also really like poem 11 from the first page). And the song you posted for 22??! was absolutely gorgeous and expressive! Thanks for sharing these sound!
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Sat Apr 25, 2020 6:26 am
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26. dear sister

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This one's a little different - more indirectly on theme. I wrote this song for my sister today (it's her bday soon) and don't really have more creative energy to spare, so I'm counting this as today's poem.
  





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Sun Apr 26, 2020 8:10 am
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27. i see you and see the father

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Wed Apr 29, 2020 5:29 am
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30. friendship no man can equate

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Thu Apr 30, 2020 6:27 am
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31. dear brother

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Wrote another song, this one's for my brother who's bday is soon.
  





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Thu Apr 30, 2020 6:36 am
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32. there will be no goodbyes

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Thu Apr 30, 2020 6:37 am
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And, well, that's the end of it! Thanks to everyone who's read along with me and given encouragement and feedback - I appreciate all of it! <3
  





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Thu Apr 30, 2020 6:40 am
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I absolutely love this latest song dedicated to your brother. The way that you've interwoven this with your faith is beautiful. What's particularly poignant about that is I often read about people writing about their experience with faith (since it is so personal), but here I'm getting a bigger picture - which is to say, the picture of your love for God & your brother, and how those two both have very important roles in your life.


What is to give light must endure burning. – Viktor Frankl
  





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Thu Apr 30, 2020 7:07 am
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Congratulations on making it to 30 sound!! 31 was really sweet and I think that poem 32 was a really sharp conclusion for the whole collection, and the short lines really help capture the drama of just what's being said too. These have been interesting but also in many ways encouraging to read this month. <3
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  








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