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Wed Apr 15, 2020 10:07 am
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soundofmind says...



16. consistent, persistent, and patient, sincere

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Fri Apr 17, 2020 10:02 am
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soundofmind says...



18. the father's delight

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Mon Apr 20, 2020 3:01 pm
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kattee says...



I absolutely love your 20th Poem. I really liked that you placed a reference from the Gospel of John:))) and I take that the formatting was trying to show a B for the Bible? Oh my goodness, it's both poetic and stylistic.

Keep writing <3 Your poems are wonderful and God bless you!
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelog.

Have a lovely day❤️
  





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Fri Apr 24, 2020 3:30 am
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soundofmind says...



24. maybe this is self control

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Wolfical says...



#22, oh my goodness. <3

Day to day I'm learning the depths that you feel
I thought you were stoic but that's just not real
Lord you made my emotions, of course you have yours
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  








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