After I've Beefed It, My First Time on a Longboard
The roaring river rushes past the skaters on their pathway, fast and winding, edged by banks so sheer that vertigo combines with fear. But some bright streak attracts his eye: he wants to look, so up we climb. With hands on mud, I start to slide, but reach the wall before I fall.
Graffitti tagged up on the wall in gold and blue and white and all the colors you'd find in the cans: he looks at them though faux Ray Bans and judges which are nice or cheap or done by kids who think they're deep. Then clambers down and starts to sweep his board across the street toward
the parking lot. Our friend joins in and races him. My bloody skin distrusts my board. I opt to walk and look at trees and river rocks and hawks that soar with wings to wind. I see them coming back again. The day is coming to an end: I want to stay, but skate away.
-- Form borrowed from William Barnes's Poem "Sister Gone"
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger. To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!
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