So I thought I commented here before?? I was like searching the thread five times over trying to find my comment so I don't accidentally duplicate what I said.
I adore your poems. It's one of the threads I look forward to reading. There isn't one I dislike, but I do know that the ones that I frequently recall are i, iii, and vii. vii made me so happy, I really like what you did with that one.
viii was also really well done. I love your word choice here, particularly the opening: "pineapple kisses cloud my mind, / sun-dropped flowers between my toes."
I also love how simple x is yet how great the story it is telling. It's telling such a large, grand story in such few, descriptive words.
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