I'm enjoying the variety in your poems snowmonkey - you are a clever rhymer and great at creating good flow especially in your rhyming pieces. I think 9 is my favorite so far - it's simple language, but comes across so genuinely!
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
I think #8 is my favourite of yours so far - the last line brings across so much with really very few words.
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