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Frankenstein project. (Done.)



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Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:36 pm
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Okay. This will be our meeting place to discuss our project. Adrian. Keara. Cynthia. Yep, that's all of you. Just post what you have to say below.
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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:12 pm
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cutiefairy18 says...



okay im online now so what do we do?





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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:13 pm
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Okay, we just have to wait for the other two. Did you get some of the script written or any of the props?
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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:15 pm
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i have a veil and an outfit for the four people going to die. As for the script i've been suffering from a writers block





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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:18 pm
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So how are you coming along with your characater?





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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:19 pm
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Hai. Okay that's fine cause I wrote the script anyway. Who's the veil for? I have the life size Dora, and I'm trying to get my dad to give me his white shirt and tie. I have things we can use as weapons and such.
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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:23 pm
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It's for the creature's bride. It's actually creepy fabric for halloween decor. It looks pretty cool. Is the script online? Because I'd like to see it.





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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:25 pm
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I have not finished typing it yet. But I will show what I have typed up. Just to let you know, what I typed is far less than what I actually have written.


Walton is on the ship writing.

Walton: Your loving brother, Walton. *glances up* Oh, a man on ice. *Pulls Victor in*

Victor: Listen to my story

W: Okay?

Mrs.Frankenstein: What a beautiful child. I want her. *grabs Elizabeth and takes her to where Victor and Mr.F are* Here's a girl. Love her. Marry her. But not right now. Maybe later.

Victor: Okay, mommy.

*lights flick off and then on*

Victor: I've spent all my life preparing for this moment. Even through my mothers death I still found room to study the ways of life. All my hard work will amount to this moment. *the creature is on the floor. Lights flicker on and off* Awake, my precious! *creature opens eyes* ... *runs away and sees Clerval*

Cleveral: What's wrong?

V: Nothing, I'm fine.

C: You look horrid

V: I'm fine

C: Need a vacation?

V: Sure.

*travels and sees Elizabeth*

E: William is dead!

V: Oh no!

E: Justine is to blame!

V: Oh no!!

*sees Justine*

J: I'm innoncent but I confess to murder anyway

Judge: You shall die *kill kill kill. Victor runs away*

V: It was my monster! *sees creature* Die, villian! Begone! *Monster raised hands*

M: Hear my story

V: Never!

M: Please?

V: Okay.

*FLASHBACK!*


It's not much typeed but I'm still working on typing because I have way more written down in my notebook.
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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:30 pm
cutiefairy18 says...



It sounds really good so far. I like Mrs. Frankensteins intoduction of Elizabeth.





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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:33 pm
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Who's going to work the lights though?





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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:36 pm
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We could just get some random kid or whoever is not on at the moment.
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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:43 pm
cutiefairy18 says...



Ok sounds good. I wonder where the others are?





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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:46 pm
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Me too. I can get all the information to Keara on the bus and I'll try to contact Cynthia by Facebook.
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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:47 pm
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When you have the time could you email me the script? That way I can start memorizing and send more feedback.





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Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:51 pm
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Okay, no problem.
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