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Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:25 pm
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Ellyphant says...



**Don't worry! I've got this**

"I'm hungry. I'll be back," Shaun said leaving. I turned around and Tuff was sitting there staring at me.

"Ur hungry, too? Go on," I said rolling my eyes. He was soon out the door after Shaun. I went to my room and looked in the body mirror. I tooked off my shirt and turned at an angle. I gasped and put my hands on my stomach. I was getting a baby pooch! It was slightly bigger than it was a month ago when I had first found out that I was pregnate. I started crying then. It was happy tears, though. I had to think of a name. I wanted to do it with Shaun. My stomach growled. I was starving. I went to the kitchen and got some carrotsand a apple.
You're more than wonderful
More than amazing
The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:51 pm
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(((UGH!!! I had a great one written up and my internet died. :'( )))

Shaun walked back into the house to see Ettabell raiding the fridge.

"Not hungry are you?" He laughed as he set the groceries on the counter and then wrapped his arms around her waist pulling her close.

"Not at all." She replied trying to pull free and get to the food on the counter. "I'm only feeding for two people."

"Uh huh." He smiled and scooped her up gently setting her on the table. "What do you want to eat?"

"Food." She replied seriously. He laughed.

"What kind of food?"

"Ediable food." She replied trying to reach around him.

"Fine, I'll let you do whatever." He laughed stepping away so she could get at the bags.
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Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:31 pm
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I went through the bags and found some Rocky Road Ice Cream.

"Yummy," I said getting a spoon and opening the top of it dipping my spoon into it. I turned around to see Shaun staring at me with a huge smile. "What? Want some?" I asked holding out the carton. He shook his head. "Awe, come on. It's Rocky Road," I said smiling.

"No, I'm fine. I bought it for you. Eat up," he replied.

"You want me to get fat, don't you," I said. "You like big girls?" He laughed.
You're more than wonderful
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The irreplaceable
Love of my life
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In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
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-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:54 pm
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"I like you teh way you are. I want you to be healthy. Thats why it isn't all junk food." He replied.

"Don't you need to feed?" She asked.

"I did on the way to the store. Didn't want blood on the bags." HE replied with a smile as he kissed her forehead.
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Tue Jul 21, 2009 10:06 pm
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"Mm, okay," I said putting ice cream on his nose.

"Are you going to get that?" He asked pulling my waist closer to his. I nodded as he tilted his nose. I licked it off giggling and kissing all over his face and finally kissing his lips.



**They kiss a lot :D*
You're more than wonderful
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The irreplaceable
Love of my life
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In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
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-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:44 am
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***Yup.***

Shaun kissed her passionatly and pulled away when she bit his lip.

"What? You can bite me but I can't bite you?" SHe smiled. He rolled his eyes.

"I try not to bite you." He replied kissing her and pulling gently on her lip to keep from breaking the skin.
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Wed Jul 22, 2009 4:55 am
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"Why don't you bite me? It would save you a whole lot of trouble," I asked waiting for his reply.


**Sorry so short!
You're more than wonderful
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The irreplaceable
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You're so incredible
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The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:46 am
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"Cause then you'd bleed." He replied. "And it woudl be a waste of your sweet blood."



*UGH!*
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Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:05 pm
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"Okay, whatever," I said pushing away and picking up where I left off with the ice cream.

"What's wrong, now?" He said sounding irritated.

"Nothing. I just think that if you went ahead and changed me into...one of you...then it would save you a lot of trouble. But, of course, my opinion never matters when you've already made up your mind," I said putting the ice cream in the freezer and getting out some cheese and broccli.

"Why would I do that? It would kill the baby," he said. I shrugged.

"Well, what about after the baby's born...speaking of the baby! We need to talk about names," I said smiling and pulling him to the living room. I sat him down and plopped myself in his lap. "So, what names do you like? For a girl, of course."
You're more than wonderful
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Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:19 pm
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Sean had to laugh at her mood changes. Would he be able to change her? Would he be able to keep from killing her when he did?

"Dawn, Jamie, Scarlet, I don't know." He shrugged. "What names do you like?"


*oy vey, names aren't my forte*
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Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:30 pm
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"Well, Deadlove said that she was going to have white hair and eyes like the color of ice with a tint of blue. He also said that she was going to be pale...so...what about...Gretchen Alice or Julene Synn?" I asked. "Oh, and that's both first and middle names," I added smiling.
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You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:36 pm
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"How about Alice Synn?" He asked.


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Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:05 pm
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"Hm, Alice Synn Ryans...no...what about Julene Alice Ryans? That has a nice ring to it," I asked turning myself to where I was facing his face looking down slightly.
You're more than wonderful
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Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:02 pm
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"Alright, sounds good to me." He smiled as he pulled her close and kissed her. "Sounds perfect."

"Good, now thats decided." She sighed as she snuggled closer. He held her close to him breathing in her scent. It was so amazing.
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Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:25 am
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I closed my eyes with my head on his chest. "I love you, Shaun," I said yawning and falling asleep.
You're more than wonderful
More than amazing
The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.








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