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Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:25 pm
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Marcus shook his head. He didn't believe her.

"I know, but that doesn't mean anythying." Her let her stand on her feet, but he kissed her soundly befoer taking off, running to where ever he could. He new it was wrong, but he had to get away.




*what did you figure out?*
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***What to post***

Leal took off after him keepig behind him just a little. "Come back!" She yelled at him. She finally caught up and jumpedon his back. "Would you wait." She growled. He kept running though so she just held on.


*ugh*
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Marcus didn't know where he was going. He just kept running, the wind sweeping his hair. Leal clung tightly to his back, her face buried in his shoulder. He jumped over a fallin tree and stopped, easing her down on it. She glared up at him.

"What is you problem?" she asked, her eyes red with anger.

"Nothing, I just felt like running." he turned adn jumped onto the lowest limb, his legs dangling from the side.
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Leal twisted her lips up and then jumped up on the tree next to him.


*tears, something needs to happen*
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 3:01 pm
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Marcus heard a noise coming from below them. A wolf walked out form under them, growling. Leal moved closer to him, taking his hand. Teh wolf transformed into a human adn leaped up beside him. Tucker sat besiode him grinning.

"Don't scare me liek that again!" Leal snapped at him.

"Sorry. I've been lookign all over for you guys. Soemone broke into the house." Tucker looked at Leal and Marcus.
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 3:43 pm
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Leal held Marcus close. "Who was it?" She asked.

"We think a vampire hunter." he replied.

"Wait, so now we have to worry about a hunter too?" Marcus growled.

"It's only after vampires, you two won't die like a vampire. In fact I'm not sure you can be killed like you were a wolf either. I'm not sure how you get killed." Tucker sighed. "But anyways, just watch out for the hunter, their not after the wolves, vamp hunters normally like wolves and team up with them. I'm not sure why it was at our house though unless someone tipped them off there were vampires there."
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MArcus shook his head. He didn't like it. Not one bit.

"So what now?" he asked Tucker.

"We go back to the house adn see what we can do."

Leal was glarign at something in the trees. A moment later, a man stepped out. He approached Leal slowly adn Marcus shifted in front of her, crouching. He chuckled.

"You must be...Marcus?" He grolwed, pushing Leal up against the tree, his body sheilding hers. She peeked out from under his arm, glaring.

"Whose asking?" Tucker stepped in frotn of both MArcus and Leal, his huge body shadowign theirs. He whistled and two more wolves came out of the shadows, circing the tree.

"Iliean. John Iliean. I'm here to talk to Leal. Alone."

MArcus growled, low in his throat. "Not on your life."

The man chuckled again. "I didn't think so. They warned me about you, you know."

"Who."

"Your father...and ex-fiance." Leal gasped.

"The girl...." she squirmed a little, movign out from behind him. MArcus glared at the man before slouchign agaisnt the tree, defeated. He buried his head in his hands.
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Leal decided it might be best to deal with the ex fiance part later. She wanted to know what this guy had to say first. She looked at him her eyes narrowing. "What do you want?"

"We need to talk." Eh repleid.

"Why?" She demanded.

"I'm not going to hurt oyu." He laughed. She crossed her arms and tapped her foot.

"You get five minutes, that's it." She hissed at him.


***What did he want***
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Wed Mar 04, 2009 1:12 pm
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*I don't know, you said something should happen, so it did. Make something up. I guess he could be the vampire hunter and he's tryign to turn her against Marcus. :s*
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Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:49 pm
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**Still your turn. :D**
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Fri Mar 06, 2009 2:16 pm
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Marcus glared as the man drew Leal to the side. What did her want? He didn't know, but he was going to find out. He marched over to the two, glaring.

"Time's up."

"But....I haven't..."

"I dont' care. Times up."




*sorry, I'm sick and I can't really think:(*
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***That's cool****

Leal turned to Marcus. "Hun, chill. Just give him a few minutes, he tries anything i'll snap his neck." She smiled and kissed her softly. "Please." He hissed, but slowly backed away. "Thank you."

"YOu know what he is right?" The guy asked.

"I made him that way." She smiled at him.

"Right. But he's a killler, a cold blood killer." The man hissed.

"So?"
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Thu Mar 26, 2009 12:21 pm
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Marcus wanted to snatch Leal away from that stranger. As he was backing away, he over heard a few words.

A cold blooded killer.... Was he really? He stopped, leaning back against the tree, thinking. He stood there a few mintues before Leal backed towards him. She reached him in seconds.

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"Nothing of importance." She replied as she hugged him.


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Wed May 20, 2009 2:41 pm
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*This has sort of died.....we need a new idea...:(*
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